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§3 It wasn't for nothing I [REBOOT]

Oct 09, 2012 10:18

Title: §3 It wasn't for nothing I [original tittle "Heat of the beach", originally aired November 23, 2011]
Collection: Heat of Hawaii
Author: xcsimisiax
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Characters/Pairings: Steve/Danny {but other characters regularly appear}
Notes: It's a reboot of my orginal story, it's time for changes.
Summary: "The best sex you will ever have ( Read more... )

fic: steve/danno, rating: nc-17, hawaii five-0, danny williams, fiction: slash, heat of hawaii, steve mcgarrett

Comments 17

passion & love as its best ext_1396645 October 9 2012, 11:25:41 UTC

phew...I need to take a deep deep breath first. okay, lets start ( ... )

Big.. i know.. sorry!! mcdanno_isa October 9 2012, 12:04:02 UTC

OK wait just a minute ... I have to stop shaking ( ... )

OMG *Thud* *Thud* Thud* Pure genius ...Damn!!! ext_1420052 October 9 2012, 14:37:52 UTC

Holy fucking shit, this ROCKED like no other! I died laughing when Danny was soooo jealous seeing Kono and Steve with his shirt off. And Steve, clueless, as usual. Bwahahaha. Poor kono, but maybe she'll meet Adam and be happy ( ... )

Awwwwwww my mind again blown away, I need to catch some air.... ext_1183844 October 9 2012, 15:04:27 UTC

Awwwww babe babe babe babe, u again do this to me, yes u did u did, like really :D I don't know what even to say not to think or maybe is just better to shut up and let myself that my mind let me flyin on wings of my crazy imagination. Yes u know what always said and keep sayin is when u writte, u writte that everythin become alive, all whats happenin I can see and hear and thats what makes most great writters to be great. That what u doin, not only great, even more…u're totaly amazin writter. Ur mind is gold and so beautiful babe, u have this in urself babe, this is special gift and u are usin it in best posible way, I'm really so happy to have u babe and proud to know u. U give us somethin we'll unfortinally never have in real show, but for that we have u --to make us happy, so once again big big big mahalo to master of writtin and my own Rockstar babe. Yes u are ( ... )

Oh,, and one more thing-You're killing me in the sweetest way ;D ext_1420052 October 9 2012, 15:05:28 UTC

Just in case you didn't get my impression of this part of the story- it fucking rocked! I love the Steve and Danny scenes where they can finally be together (and give us some HOT HOT HOT sexy visuals), enjoy each other, and always with the danger that they might be discovered by someone. But their love and lust for one another overrides sanity and they just have to feel each other and be in each other's embrace. *sigh* Sweet, yet f*cking hot at the same time,kinda like cum. And I was completely serious- I would pay MAJOR money to see Steve do a hand job in public- or even private ;D Great, I had calmed down from your story, now I'm horny again- I blame you, you talented bee-otch.Your Bossy Bee-otch loves you and your story.
Now when's the next part????? Give me a little I need a whole lot more when it's THIS good! You talented, evil girl, teasing us this way...and we love it! ;D