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§2 One step at a time II [REBOOT]

Jul 08, 2012 13:55

Title: §2 One step at a time II [original tittle "Heat of the beach", originally aired November 23, 2011]
Collection: Heat of Hawaii
Author: xcsimisiax
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Characters/Pairings: Steve/Danny {but other characters regularly appear}
Notes: It's a reboot of my orginal story, it's time for changes.
Summary: “God, I act like a teen ( Read more... )

fic: steve/danno, hawaii five-0, danny williams, rating: r, fiction: slash, heat of hawaii, steve mcgarrett

Comments 21

Three hearts.... mary_mcgarrett July 8 2012, 16:26:01 UTC

very good, Domi ....... very good! .. Steve finally finds his reason for living and be happy with "his" Danno and "his" Princess! So good to read and see how that love is messing with the heads of both in detail and you do it so well! Kono is confusing, but we know it is a matter of time for her to understand what is happening ......
all these questions, doubts and fears that afflict the heart of Steve, give a delicious flavor to the story .....
I look forward, as always, for more reboots and for more sequences! Congratulations and thank you for this wonderful reading, babe! <3

Re: Three hearts.... xcsimisiax July 8 2012, 16:39:49 UTC

You're more than welcome Amally :)
I'm soo happy you love this part :) I know you read some short shots of this before but like you see - at the end I changed this partially :) And I'm trully happy you love that REBOOT - to be honest I love it too :)

Now I guess all has more sense - especially tension between boys and Kono <3

Mahalo 4 comments Babe <3
xxx

I guess I'm totally busted. Like Steve with Danno and Gracie ♥ montanamonroex July 8 2012, 16:35:37 UTC

I guess I'm totally busted. Like Steve with Danno and Gracie ♥ I'm so in love with Gracie and Uncle Steve together ♥ This little girl is so amazing on so many levels ♥ She's the carbon copy of Danno ♥ And Steve lover her from the first moment they met ♥ Gracie wrapped him around her little fingers ♥ And now she has the coolest ever uncle ( ... )

You made falling deeper in love with HoH <3 montanamonroex July 8 2012, 17:42:14 UTC

You know what the best was in this chapter? :D Next to the fact that you made falling deeper in love with HoH <3 And I was really deep, sys <3 The fact that I once again found myself in this chapter <3 It wasn't like I watch a movie scene, but I was part of the chapter <3

I was sitting next to shirtless Steve on the sand and we talked <3 He told me all his thoughts <3 I was with Gracie and Kono over the ocean, chasing waves <3 I was with Gracie, Danny and Steve at the store, looking for boards for her <3 And it's a so fucking amazing feeling <3 To be part of their lives <3 And you made it possible <3

And it's so special to 'see' Steve's thoughts <3 To know what he's thinking, what's going on in his head <3 How he sees the different things <3 How he can't stop thinking about Danny <3 And all the time his thoughts are going back to him <3 He can't help it <3 I guess most of his thoughts are covered by Danny <3 And I can't blame him at all <3

And it was so amazing to read how he sees the whole IA affair with Kono <3 And how he sees ( ... )

The more I read from REBOOT, the more I'm in love ♥ montanamonroex July 8 2012, 18:43:00 UTC

The more I read from REBOOT, the more I'm in love ♥ It's so much more mature and deeper ♥ And it's so amazing to see all these little changes and details ( ... )

montanamonroex July 8 2012, 19:17:19 UTC

I guess the best in this chapter was the different povs. At least for me. That I can see the events, their lives through Steve's eyes, through Kono's eyes and also through Gracie's <3 How they see, how they feel <3

How their feelings changed during these months <3 How Steve got from a light crush on Kono to realise that Danny is the love of his life <3 And it's so amazing to see these transformation <3 That even Steve's aware of Kono's feeling, that she maybe feels more in his direction, he makes it clear for her with his actions that he doesn't feel more <3 But it doesn't mean that he's not willing to do everything for her <3 To protect her, his 'little' sister <3

And on the other hand see Kono <3 That she sniffs that something changed between Steve and Danny <3 And she doesn't know what to do <3 She's confused about her own feelings and she doesn't have anyone to talk with about her feelings <3 And I guess she doesn't even sure about how deep her feelings are. And what to do with this <3 How to react, how to behave <3 ( ... )