Title: §2 One step at a time II [original tittle "Heat of the beach", originally aired November 23, 2011]
Collection: Heat of Hawaii
Author: xcsimisiax
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Characters/Pairings: Steve/Danny {but other characters regularly appear}
Notes: It's a reboot of my orginal story, it's time for changes.
Summary: “God, I act like a teen
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all these questions, doubts and fears that afflict the heart of Steve, give a delicious flavor to the story .....
I look forward, as always, for more reboots and for more sequences! Congratulations and thank you for this wonderful reading, babe! <3
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I'm soo happy you love this part :) I know you read some short shots of this before but like you see - at the end I changed this partially :) And I'm trully happy you love that REBOOT - to be honest I love it too :)
Now I guess all has more sense - especially tension between boys and Kono <3
Mahalo 4 comments Babe <3
xxx
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I was sitting next to shirtless Steve on the sand and we talked <3 He told me all his thoughts <3 I was with Gracie and Kono over the ocean, chasing waves <3 I was with Gracie, Danny and Steve at the store, looking for boards for her <3 And it's a so fucking amazing feeling <3 To be part of their lives <3 And you made it possible <3
And it's so special to 'see' Steve's thoughts <3 To know what he's thinking, what's going on in his head <3 How he sees the different things <3 How he can't stop thinking about Danny <3 And all the time his thoughts are going back to him <3 He can't help it <3 I guess most of his thoughts are covered by Danny <3 And I can't blame him at all <3
And it was so amazing to read how he sees the whole IA affair with Kono <3 And how he sees ( ... )
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How their feelings changed during these months <3 How Steve got from a light crush on Kono to realise that Danny is the love of his life <3 And it's so amazing to see these transformation <3 That even Steve's aware of Kono's feeling, that she maybe feels more in his direction, he makes it clear for her with his actions that he doesn't feel more <3 But it doesn't mean that he's not willing to do everything for her <3 To protect her, his 'little' sister <3
And on the other hand see Kono <3 That she sniffs that something changed between Steve and Danny <3 And she doesn't know what to do <3 She's confused about her own feelings and she doesn't have anyone to talk with about her feelings <3 And I guess she doesn't even sure about how deep her feelings are. And what to do with this <3 How to react, how to behave <3 ( ... )
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