Mistakes

[xclassiccase]

Title: Mistakes
Author: Me
Pairing: 2min focused, slight JongKey and Onew/Luna(like real slight)
Rating: R (for implied sexy times)
Warnings: Kind of depressing at one point, implied sexy times, Oh and language.
Summary: The guilt in the pit of Minho’s stomach ate at him every day. He shouldn’t have let Taemin say those three words to him. He shouldn’t

Comments

[xclassiccase]

Hi-hi :)

Yeah, I will admit that I need help with my writing haha I haven't dont it in so long. So what do you think I should do?

[weixiao1619]

LOL it also happened to me, you know, writer's block thingy... :)

hmm... 'bout that, let's give more emphasis to the angst in the story. Like, how about adding more of Minho's deep feelings? Sumthin like that. Or like, how would Minho bear his feelings of lust and love over Taemin? Is it enough to reject him after their love making?

[xclassiccase]

Ahh my writer's block lasted for two years... haha

Hmmm... IDK... Minho doesn't love Taemin. Haha.

[weixiao1619]

It's me!! This story is nice! For the fact that I reblog it in tumblr (which means, I recommend it for all of the tumblr users. :D )

Uhmm, I have a suggestion, how about we extend the ideas to make the story even better (I mean this story is very good but we'll make it more than very good. lol)

:)

I LOVE YOU FOR POSTING THIS BTW. :))

[xclassiccase]

I was actually gonna make it even sadder but I couldn't take the pain! Lol.

Aww thank you so much. <3 Means a lot.

[dainty_empress]

Such a refreshing read after the countless lovey dovey fics. Asshole Minho, he's hot!

“Well, you took notes didn’t you?” Minho giggled teasingly.
“No, hyung,” the maknae replied oblivious to Minho’s slight sarcasm.

I laughed.

Then I wanted to cry when Taemin sang himself happy birthday on the floor. SO ANGSTY

Choi Minho, I fucking hate you, okay?

I laughed again and felt bad about it. Oh bitchy Taemin, I never knew I could love you so.

Seriously, my fic feels like it's absolute rubbish now. It doesn't nearly convey as much emotion as yours /jealous

[xclassiccase]

I make a vow never to write a loveydovey fanfic in my life :) Hahahah

Pretty much, though...that was how my first kiss went down, so you can imagine >.< how bad I wanted to laugh too.

OH SHUSH! Yours was good too! Now you can write more and I will too..maybe! LOL.

[yesalmen]

How about Taemin starts going out with different men and rubs it in the face of Minho.hohoho I`m evil

[xclassiccase]

Bwahahaha. Idk yet. I'm tryna stray away from cliches right now haha. But that would be the best revenge, huh?