Saiyuki Fanfic: Gratitude

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Title: Gratitude
Series: Saiyuki
Status: One-shot, complete
Rating: R
Pairings: GojyoXHakkai
Disclaimer: Saiyuki and its characters belong to Minekura-sensei, the Saiyuki Project, TV Tokyo, Dentsu and Pierrot, etc.
Warning: Non-worksafe. Some violence, and mentions of prostitution.
Notes: Beta by meicdon13. Written as a gift for kansouamein 7thnight_smut(2008). I'm not particularly

Comments

[purpleicicles]

Arrrgh! No! You can't tail off there!!! I demand you write more!! Haha, actually, I quite like the ending the way it is, with that same dizzying uncertainty that we entered in on at the beginning. Gojyo's what-iffery was very IC for someone who promotes 'not thinking at all', and the character interactions were fantastic!! Kudos! :D

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Thank you!=) I remember being really worried about OOC-ness since I wrote this overnight and seemed to be adding unnecessary stuff to word-pad and reach the quota, but I'm glad you liked it anyway.^^

[gen50]

yes, more would be good, so i didnt make a new comment...
the word pad doesnt show

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Hmm...well, even though a lot of people seemed to like it, the scene with Sanzo is a word pad. Same with the thing about band-aids and Gojyo thinking about not thinking, which ended up as an entire paragraph of thinking and lots of words for me, lulz. And some other parts I can't tell now. But thanks!=D

[geri]

This story really does need a sequel to it^^.
But overall i really enjoyed reading it i has everything in it to keep me coming back for seconds.

The way goyjo and hakkai interact is just so dam amazing you can actually visualize them talking and making love all at the same time.

And i believe that they have a sense of what the other is feeling regardless of the circumstances are, they will always be great together.

Like two halves finally finding that balance that makes them a whole

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Thank you!=D I don't feel as if I've put enough thought while writing this, so your insights into it are really amazing.^^

[meobnal]

No! Don't stop there! ::wibble::

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Sorry.^^;; I'm hoping to get the other version(s) out though, please look forward to it.:)

[t3nsa1]

Aggh! You can't stop there! This is so wonderfully written I need more! Are you writing a sequel?

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Thanks!=) I don't have any ideas for a sequel, or even plans/motivation to write one.^^;; But I'll be working on this fic's, uh, ‘predecessor’, please look forward to it.^^

[dznerchick]

This piece is really good! I want to know MORE! I hope you continue!

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Thank you!=) Unfortunately, I don't have any ideas for a sequel, or even plans/motivation to write one.^^;; Please look forward to other versions of this fic (prompt: gangster) though.=D