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[FIC] NewS - Hell Within

Aug 20, 2011 13:22

Title: Hell Within
Fandom: NewS
Pairing: Yamashita/Kato
Rating: PG-13 (dark, angsty, crazy!violent!Pi)
Disclaimer: Not associated with Johnny's Entertainment. This is fiction; it never happened.

A/N: For rietje_1, as apart of my Happy Birthday!! event. I hope this is acceptable, even if I did screw it up and wrote it from Shige's PoV instead XD; Unbeta'd ( Read more... )

* drabble, f: news, :: writing

Comments 3

rietje_1 August 20 2011, 21:16:31 UTC

No, I don't mind at all! ♥ It's your writing, and I think it worked better this way, actually. XD I feel bad about that prompt though. >_> Trying for something different only made things harder. Sorry for that.

Buuuut, I'm loving the twist of Yamapi having this... pent-up anger/dark side that only comes out with someone he trusts. Shige was a good choice for the pairing - being all flawed and I guess, easier to open up to - and him secretly enjoying to see such a different Yamapi and being the only one who gets to do that.

And yay for the facade element, that was totally what I was thinking when I wrote that prompt and I'm just happy to see it being used! :D I mean... sure those guys like their job, but sometimes it feels like there's so much pressure on them for remaining professional. It's nice to see it touched upon, from both sides. So yeah, thank you so much for writing this. ♥

LMAO. Okay. Here's an essay for you. XD

grydo2life August 21 2011, 03:19:09 UTC

Yay XD Don't worry about the prompt; it was difficult to start with, but I really don't get to write dark fic very often, so it was a refreshing change =P

I was rather pleased with it too. Pi's one of those characters who has the potential to be... just about anything, be it happy go lucky or twisted and scary. He's so versatile to play with 8D -bricked-

Yeah, that's one of my favorite elements too. (In general, I mean.) The boys are so complicated; it's fun to work with that in stories.

...I like it when you write me essays... -(._.)-

rietje_1 August 21 2011, 19:19:58 UTC

Glad it wasn't as bad for you as I feared.

Ahaha, nothing wrong with some experimenting. Of course I don't want anything to happen to those guys, but yeah. Sometimes, I want something not so cute and fluffy (or porn) and I like seeing some people here give it a try. Inner horror fangirl clawing its way out XD.

Those guys are definitely multi-layered and I'm growing kind of tired of some of the clichés about them and prefer people showing them in a different light.

And sure, I'll keep writing essays and try not to agonize about being succinct with you. XD