FIC: Be Careful Of the Curse That Falls On Young Lovers (GTOP)

[xbigbangx]

title: Be Careful Of the Curse That Falls On Young Lovers
author: xbigbangx
pairing: onesided!gtop
genre: angst/drama, romance, character study?
word count: ~900 approx.
summary: it's not men, it's just him.
warning: all in lapslock, like seriously. i wasn't really up to caps idk. there might be run on sentences..., and it's been a while since I've

Comments

[peacensafety]

I think that the way you wrote it is just fine, it's part of the art and it makes everything seem more real, for some reason...

I really liked this (even though I prefer happy endings...) and I can't wait to see more from you!

[xbigbangx]

Thanks a lot, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll see what comes of the prequel ahaha (:

[arsinen]

I DEMAND THIS BE FIXED....

No just kidding it's your fic after all. 8P Anyways it was good I really liked the fact that Hyunnie didn't make a dramatic scene... didn't even let Jiyong reject him fully either now that I think about it.

"life goes on" very true. No matter what happens life goes on sadly enough. Oh I want to hug my Hyunnie so bad. Now I'm curious on Jiyong's thoughts since this was Hyunnie's POV. Oo

I really do look forward to more from you though. 8)

[xbigbangx]

Ahaha, I might fix it later on when I'm not feeling especially lazy. Or perhaps in the prequel I'm still kind of planning out.

But thanks so much for commenting & reading, I'm very glad you enjoyed it. ^^. I will see what I can do about the whole GD pov thing ahaha. Thanks again~

[mylenne007]

Wanna GD´s POV now! :D I like it, is very realistic!

[xbigbangx]

thanks a lot for reading & commenting. idk about GD's pov but I'll see if I can try to write one as a kind of side fic for this ahaha. thanks again (:

[snoaz]

This was well written; I was surprised it was told from Seunghyun's pov, because I'd have guessed it would be Jiyong that had the crush (what with his confession of almost falling for Tabi and stuff). Perhaps you could incorporate that in the expanded version of your story; fleshen it out a bit, now the ending did feel a bit rushed (compared to the first part where you describe very well how Seunghyun was feeling. I like the throw-back to his high-school years.)

Anyway, I'd definitely be interested in seeing more from this!

[xbigbangx]

thanks so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. And I supposed it kind of would make sense, but idk. I guess I kind of just liked the thought if it being seunghyun instead of jiyong. I'm sorry it seems a bit rushed, I suppose it actually kind of was. When I get around to the expanded version of this fic or something, I'll see about making the ending much more indepth & i'll contemplate writing a diff companion piece to this in GD's pov.

thanks for reading & commenting!

[xbigbangx]

I very much agree that seunghyun is an interesting person. it was a bit of fun trying to get into his head just a little bit and I'm glad I did this story justice. Honestly I was a bit nervous that it wasn't going to be that well done, but I'm glad you thought it was realistic.

Thanks for the concrit though, I guess I did try to finish it a bit too fast, so thanks for pointing that out for me. and as I've stated others who've commented, I'll see about a companion fic to this in GD's pov. I hope I'll be able to do it w/o being deterred.

aah sorry for such a long reply, but thanks a lot for reading & commenting!