Tears of a Broken Heart

[xbigbangx]

I watched from the distance, always in the distance, as they lay there, cuddling and whispering. I watch as they smile at each other and snuggle upon the couch.

It's been so many months since they first got together and yet everyday my heart feels as if it's being stabbed over and over again.

I couldn't take anymore so I decided to go up to the

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[jemnise]

*DIES FROM CRYING*

[xbigbangx]

aww~ don't die on me!! why did you cry yourself to death?!
wahh! was it my fault! oh noe!! must revive you!! *gives you some type of life saving water*

[cindyxmc]

SPOTT!

[cindyxmc]

ugh, so angsty!
my heart can't take it anymore!
i'm so sorry but gah,
i'm such a GRI SHIPPER!
they have to stick together.

but but, poor top, it broke my heart
to see him so weak and crying.
&& he pushed ji away,
ji should just, stop leading TOP on!

this is so beautifully written though,
my heart can only take so little angst. LOL
<333

[xbigbangx]

Yeah, I know... D:
I seem to be able to write angst the best...
Ji should just stop doing that to TOP, ne?! >[ grr!!

[heatherxwho]

aww. poor, poor TOP. i'm all teary eyed now.
i guess it doesn't help that Backstreet Boys'
song "Inconsolable" just started to play on
my iTunes as i was reading this. haha.

[no_genre]

spot :D

[no_genre]

so i was reading the other one & it made no sense
[-_______-];
that's b/c i hadn't read this one yet

anyways this part has so much angst
DDDD:
my heart cries for seunghyun :/
why can't he just let ji in
wai? that babo >___>
he is just hurting both of them
mostly himself
but ji should make up his mind & stop confusing him

i go reread again

[humancloning]

ohhhhhhh you made me cry poor my dear seung hyung, I'll confort you don't worry *hugs him and you * XDD

it's sososososos perfect T_T please write as soon as you inspirations let you xDDD

*hugs+

[xbigbangx]

bb, I make myself cry. xD aww~ thanks. we both needed the hug ! haha.
aw~ you think so? thanks so much. that means a lot to me because I personally think that I'm kind of bad at writing... ahaha.

[humancloning]

you're not a bad writing believe I was a beta tester of spanish fic and I almost puked with them >.< so I really know who writes a good story or not ^_^

I want to read the third part *_*

[xbigbangx]

lol. that's must've been horrible. when it comes to horrible grammar and sentence structure, i go crazy. xD
thank you ^^

lol. It's in the process of writing xD I'm not even half way done. or maybe I am. iono. I'll post it by latest Saturday. Hopeefully I'll get it done on Friday. haha. thanks for the comment~