It's Not the Way I'm Meant to Be, It's Just the Way the Operation Made Me (s-a)

[xbeautyxkillerx]

Title: It's Not the Way I'm Meant to Be, It's Just the Way the Operation Made Me (s-a)
Author: xbeautyxkillerx 
Rating: R
Pairing: Ryden
POV: 2nd, Brendon's.
Summary:  A gentle graze on the neck with gossamer pink lips. A bucking hipbone ramming repeatedly onto bare skin. A whisper that you would never, ever let Ryan go.
Disclaimer: If I owned these boys, I'd be

Comments

[terry_dent]

After such strong things all you want is to sit somewhere in silence and enjoy the emotions caused by them. Because it's adorable. Because it touches something deep inside, you know. Every single line reaches your mind and makes you absorb into story. That is that.
And your style. Your incredibly beautiful language. And the way you wrote it. It's more like great, you know. I mean, not everyone have an ability to make it like that. It's specific.
And the last paragraph. All this 'camera' thing. And the somehow right description of Ryan. His state of mind and feelings. The way Brendon reacts to the whole situation.
And. Palahniuk, yeah?)
it is beyond description.
So. Thanks!

[xbeautyxkillerx]

Oh, wow. That was an amazing comment. It made my day! I really appreciate when people take the time to write a comment like that. Thank you, so much. <3