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xaritomene

Magic, Marriage and Mayhem, Part 7

Jan 06, 2009 03:03

Title: Magic, Marriage and Mayhem

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: mpreg as a major plotpoint, unabashed fluff, and a little - a very little - swearing. Also, ZOMG, Arthur and Merlin actually manage to kiss this chapter. I am confused as to how this baby occurred when the two of them are so very chaste. They just WILL NOT behave and get it on like they ( Read more... )

fic (merlin): magic marriage and mayhem, fandom: merlin, fanfiction, pairing: merlin/arthur, rating: pg-13, genre: drama, genre: humour, genre: fluff, warning: mpreg, warning: slash

Comments 56

simallyher January 6 2009, 03:58:35 UTC

Its great to see another chapter. That was awesome, I like how Arthur's getting more gentle but still a prat at times. Just wondering when Merlin will actually start showing so people will stop picking on him :( Those stable boys should've been put in the stocks for that!

xaritomene January 8 2009, 14:13:58 UTC

*grin* Thank you! Poor ARthur - he doens't know HOW to be one hundred percent nice. ^_^ He is trying though, poor love.

As for Merlin showing, he's about two and a half months along now, so it's about two more weeks until he's "safe", I should think. It would be more for a 'normal' pregnancy, but I figure Merlin's so skinny and his body isn't meant for it, so he'll probably start showing earlier. ^_^

Arthur WAS rather lenient on them, wasn't he? He just doesn't want Merlin to feel like he's being coddled, I suppose. Anyway, thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you're still enjoying it. :D

bleu4bleu January 6 2009, 05:28:15 UTC

Yay! So glad that you wrote more to this. I love how this entire thing is so believable (well, as believable as a male pregnancy can get :D). You write the boys so well.

Cannot wait for more!

xaritomene January 8 2009, 14:43:41 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad that people are still reading it after the loooong time it took me to get this chapter out there. And it's SUCH a relief to hear that it's realistic; I was a bit worried about that. After all, it is mpreg. ^_^

Thank you for commenting! More should be up soon, I hope. *grin*

lupus_malus January 6 2009, 06:13:57 UTC

I'm really enjoying this story.

xaritomene January 8 2009, 14:53:35 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm so glad. ^_^

to_question January 6 2009, 07:11:56 UTC

Mpreg and I have a mostly hate/ selective love relationship. I most definitely love this one.

xaritomene January 8 2009, 14:54:25 UTC

*laughs* Until I started writing this one, I was pretty much the same! But it's always lovely to hear that people are enjoying it when it's really not their thing, so thank you! I'm happy you're liking this one. :D

kuhekabir January 6 2009, 08:49:49 UTC

i think merlin is doing great, after all, he is the one carrying the baby, the sudden life change, i would be so terrified i would be hiding in a corner and not coming out...lol...awesome update...more?

xaritomene January 8 2009, 15:04:20 UTC

Brave, isn't he? But he has Arthur there for him. *sniggle* More hopefully coming soon!