Comments | xaritomene: reel_fic Three: 'Tis a Pity He's a Whore, Part IV

xaritomene

reel_fic Three: 'Tis a Pity He's a Whore, Part IV

Mar 18, 2009 23:32

Title: 'Tis a Pity... Part IV

Author: ( Read more... )

fandom: merlin, fic (merlin): tis a pity he's a whore, fanfiction, genre: au, genre: romance, pairing: merlin/arthur, genre: fluff, warning: slash, rating: nc-17, comm: reel_merlin

Comments 3

drusillas_rain March 19 2009, 02:07:15 UTC

Loved the Central Park scene!

selfinduced March 21 2009, 01:14:31 UTC

i love this!! i love how you've adapted the characters into the cliche and Lancelot! hee!

also, i (maybe?) found a small inconsistency: "-And you can't even play hooky properly. Very sad." Merlin's wicked grin was what made Arthur press a kiss to his cheek, wishing, not for the first time, that they hadn’t agreed not to kiss on the mouth. Had he been with any other boy or girlfriend, he would have kissed them at that.

this scene comes after the scene where Merlin kisses Arthur and they make out and share their childhood stories. is that how it was meant to be?

ykraiina June 6 2009, 03:47:17 UTC

awww, this is the cutest.
and they're kissing!

i am unashamed to say that i am dying for some more juicy sex scenes. your THAT good! xD