So i am in a creative writing class and we had to write a poem about an object from our childhood that reminds us of a family member... I kinda want some feedback if you guys have some time
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That's a really interesting poem Nate. To pick knives is such an interesting choice for childhood. But I feel like I know you a little bit better now. A little bit blunt at times, but I suppose that was intentionally done]. It spurred my interest at the beginning. I like you how didn't start off the poem with what the object was-it keeps anticipation as the reader to find out what the object is. I like it.
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