prisonbreak100

[xadie]

Here we go with entry number 2:

Title: Buttons
Character/Pairing: T-bag, Sara
Prompt: 048. Punishment
Rating: G
Summary: T-Bag finds a new hobby
Author’s Notes: Sort of potential pre-het - is that cheating?
Warnings: None

Comments

[bandaged_doll]

I love your icon and especially your story! I find it to be hard to come up with reasons for T-Bag and Sara to be together, but counseling never came to mind. The dialogue was really good and sounded so much like what T-Bag would say. And the last two sentences were really effective and well-written :)

[xadie]

Aw, thanks honey, that means a lot, especially coming from a T-Bag/Sara fan. The icon I made yesterday, and spent ages getting the manip just right, then in the end it came out not really looking like they were in the same place at all! I still like it, though. As for the dialogue, T-Bag seems to come easily to me, not so much the doc. I don't think I've got her quite right yet.

I'm really glad you liked the last two sentences, because I'm rubbish at endings! I never seem to pitch them quite right. Thanks for the encouragement!

[bottledshapes]

I'm not normally a fan of T-Bag/Sara, haven't a clue why but you may have just turned me. This is brilliant, I really like it.
I have to agree with promise that the ending is fantastic too!

[bohemiangel]

I know I say this every time, but that was brilliant as well...I've always quite liked the idea of T-Bag/Sara although you just know that she's got so many issues, he'd just eat her alive!