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[x_zeitgeist]

Title: Death Is In Love With Us (3/4)
Pairing: Matt/Everyone.
Rating: NC-17.
Summary: Four stories of Death for the 31st.
Genre: AU. Deadly.
Dedications: xmegalomaniac for being absolutely freaking kickass and being my Matt/Brian inspiration. talia_mole for being my gigglesnort buddy. xxlock_n_loadxx for leaving me the best comments ever. withthefire_x for being so awesome and having the best icons

Comments

[xgunnedlilies]

Ok. I didn't know you posted anything. So I read all three today. In an hour.
And you shall receive a novel of a comment, regarding all three.
Because why comment three times when I can simply torture you with one big detailed one?

Act I: I was skeptical. I have to admit. As much as it sounds like release, death is a mystery to me and haunts my very dreams. But I read it anyways. And I was amazed. The pure beauty of your writing was powerful. I liked how the day was normal, nothing special, and poor Jimmy had to see the most beautiful angel of death. And the car crash was so detailed, that I didn't know he got hit, until I read some sentence regarding blood and splintered bones.
Act II: Ohh, dear Brian. I liked his death. And the sex was so abstract, I had no clue what was going on. Nevertheless, I loved how he just plunged that fucking syringe into those perfect arms and pffft. Dead. Bye-bye, sexy. I'm so evil.
Act III: It was Zacky and I want him to die. Slowly, painfully, and in traffic. In all honestly, it was Zacky. Feline

[x_palimpsest]

Guh *orgamisic* I love novel comments! They blow my miiiind. Especially this one.

1 - I knew there would be controversy with that one =) Even I was a bit 'meh' with the intro, because I'm still confused about the whole death shebang. And even so, this fic didn't quite slot in with my beliefs. I'm so glad you got that impression. I really wanted this one to be simple, since the next three... uh... aren't, really >.2 - Eeee, I'm so sorry! You know why that one's abstract? I was writing it with my mother behind me doing the ironing and I couldn't use too much terminology. Muahaha. By the way - the wording of that made me drool. 'Matt plunged into Syn and brought him instant death!' .. *eviller

[living_deads]

Wow, I liked all three parts so far. You're a pretty good writer, I have to admit that.

Anyway, I cannot wait to read the last part, so yeah, post it soon!

A (living_deads)

[x_palimpsest]

xD Thank you deary!

[xmegalomaniac]

So, I think that you should most definitely change the names in this and get it published. It's so heartbreakingly beautiful, every chapter. I especially love how Matt is anything but evil. You convey that so well.

You have a talent for giving your characters a depth and rounded personality in a few pages that most people couldn't achieve if they were writing a novel. It's almost as if I can predict what they're going to do by the end of an installment, because I feel like I know them. That, my dear, is something to be proud of.

But poor Johnny! That was almost too realistic. I used to act like that when I was kid (and I still do sometimes). Ha, I blame Palahniuk. I squealed when I saw all of your artistic references in the beginning, cause I am familiar with almost all of them.

Thank you so much for this installment, and I cannot wait for the end!

[x_palimpsest]

I love you and your comments because you pick up on the little things I randomly slip in. Like, that Johnny was perhaps the one character I had a definitive idea of. He is just... guh. I'mma need to start roleplaying him. Ditch my horny, arrogant bastards and go for adorableness.

I'm so glad you get Matt, because I wanted to demolish this idea that death is some big evil nasty, and Matt works so well for that role, simply because of the way he looks. He's a huge mother-fucker yet I get the feeling he's soft and squisheh =D

Thank you so much for all of this <333 And dude! I love you for recognising my references! I think that's why writing this hurt as much as it did, because I could associate with Johnny - from his fear to his entertianment preferences.

I am writing the end... right about now. Tis icky. I'm gonna finish it and be uninspired and sucky.

[christinalp]

omfg!