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Dec 28, 2006 09:46

Title: Intoxicated.
Pairing: Matt/Brian (A7X)
Rating: R.
Summary: It's the worst, coldest, dampest, darkest New Year's Eve ever.
Genre: Weird.
Dedications: xmegalomaniac for being hardcore and everyone who writes MattBrian. Because I swear, without inspiration I am nothing.

There's a place in the dark where the animals go. )

fanfic:matt/brian, fanfic, fanfic:complete, fanfic:oneshot, fanfic:a7x, fanfic:seasonal

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remenissionsx December 28 2006, 10:36:12 UTC
Aw. Poor Val.

But yay, Bri//Matt!

<3

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x_palimpsest January 4 2007, 12:15:17 UTC
OTP BABEHCAKES.

... I love how I'm replying to this a year late >:[ *mildlyevil*

I know, I feel for Val. She's mah favourite. I want to marry her and create her babies with my non-existant man juice.

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remenissionsx January 4 2007, 12:21:41 UTC
hehe.
Manjuice.
But I'm right there with you.
If I ever met Matt I'd probably say something like, you know, you're hot. Can I marry your girlfriend?

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x_palimpsest January 4 2007, 12:40:55 UTC
Ahahaha. I was talking about this just the other day.

I'd take Val over Matt >.> And I'd ask to borrow Michelle while I'm at it. Ihateherbutyanno, the twin thing. Everyone has the Twin-Thing Fetish.

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thexpills December 28 2006, 13:49:15 UTC
O.O Oh Man..
*bows down* We're not worthy!!!
I swear I..I mean..EEEE!
That was so beautifully written and the way you made it so cristal clear,I could vividly see and feel.
I love the color motive,this band is just a blend.And I love how Zack and Jim were kind of intoxicated philosophers.
Brewing hate or brewing... what? <---Here I squealed
Good job for getting through the year.

Congratulations at surviving through this shitty existences.

2006 has been pretty fucking great.

Heres to the next endless period of crap <---Here I applauded
And many others lines.Ugh,I had so much to say,but I must leave and basically I'm dumbfounded.
:D Your stories make me want to stop writing cuz it ain't worth posting crap on the same site as you
<333

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x_palimpsest January 4 2007, 12:17:56 UTC
*littlefavouritewriterdance* You = amazing. And if you stop posting your art I will actually hurt you in your sleep. I worship you, damnit! You're my inspiration. Le sigh.

Yanno, those lines... I hated them when I wrote them! I thought they were so awkward and out of place, so you have no idea how much that means, really.

And Zack and Jim are just... they're wise drunks. It's how they function. They're intoxicated so often that it's the sobriety you gotta watch out for - their minds aren't used to it.

Thank you so much ♥

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truthwritaslies December 28 2006, 14:03:19 UTC
*hugs you tight* i love you i love you i love you! this was awesome. fave parts: the end of course, and johnny acting like a little kid. wise jimmy is love.

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x_palimpsest January 4 2007, 12:18:48 UTC
I LOVE YOU TOO YOU PWN. (and so does your icon *drool*)

I hardly ever write Johnny and Jimmy, so I really went a bit nuts with them xD They're mai favourites.

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xgunnedlilies December 28 2006, 14:37:05 UTC
Fav line: "Sometimes I worry about the intelligence of our band."
And I, too.
But I honestly loved this. I love how, in all places, they locked them both in a basement, instead of making them go to their respective rooms and fume. They fume together, and works things out together. Nice.
Line(s) that means the most to me:
"Liars?"

"Yeah. As in... they never tell each other the truth. Maybe if they did there'd be some understanding."

"But they're friends, they don't... I... friends don't do that."

"Don't be so naive, Zack. They lie because they are friends."
That's so fucking true!! You get my soul for that line.
I love how everything is tied up into New Years, and a deeper meaning of a shitty year.
And how the ending is simply saddening, but I loved it nonetheless.
Memories. ♥

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x_palimpsest January 4 2007, 12:22:14 UTC
...*makessweetmonkeylovetoyourleg*

You are amazing. After enjoying your writing so deeply it's amazing to get such a comment [: Thank you, so much. I really am quite speechless, which is an intense rarity.

Originally, they were going to go to their rooms to ponder, then storm out on their way to apologising, crash into each other, blah blah... more pensive retrospection than actual action. So obviously, I had to switch that for gruff door-bashing.

Again, thank youuu ♥

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jumper24 December 28 2006, 16:18:53 UTC
This was so wonderful to read, I absolute love it. I want to read about Val reaction to catching them and Matt and Brian trying to explain that it wasn't what it looked like. Who would have thought Jimmy and Zacky being the wise ones?

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x_palimpsest January 4 2007, 12:23:33 UTC
I was thinking about doing like a 200 word drabble set just a few hours after O_O Matt saying how much his year had changed after just an hour or something. I do not know. Shall probably do it as a secret post D:<

Thank you for R&Ring! <3 Means a lot, darling.

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