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x_yourkiss

In Custody-Ch 2

Jun 18, 2005 13:40

Title: In Custody
Chapter: 2/?
Author: x_yourkiss
Pairing: Pierre/David
Rating: PG for now.
Words: 728
Summary: AU - David is the governor’s son, and Pierre is a newly released delinquent, doing community service for the Governor and his family.
Disclaimer: Not real. No matter how much we wish.
Previous Chapter Chapter 1

( Chapter 2 )

Comments 60

icaughtfire27 June 18 2005, 18:57:35 UTC

im really getting into this story, but you need to have pierre and david at least meet in the next chapter

x_yourkiss June 18 2005, 19:02:54 UTC

I swear they will. First thing. I have it all planned out in my head. *smiles* Thank you!

neitoperhonen June 18 2005, 19:12:59 UTC

So short! How dare you? Nah, just kidding, I'm happy that you updated this. I love it

x_yourkiss June 18 2005, 19:18:08 UTC

I'm sorry, it's like I want to write more, but then in the end I go through and take stuff out because it doesn't sound good enough. Bleh, I'm going to try to make the next chapter like 100000000000000000000000000000X better. But thank you so much anyway for reading this. *smiles*

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x_yourkiss June 18 2005, 22:41:31 UTC

Aww, thank you. I was scared everyone would hate it! I will definetely update sooner than I did last time.

eternitybreaks June 18 2005, 22:47:44 UTC

Awww thank you for the dedication, it's so much appreciated. Mostly because I am sure half the people hate me here lol. Hey if something is written badly you offer advice?

However you I don't need to offer anything too. It was short but effective. Your use of imagery is beautiful, and the pain of anguish you described for Daivd was great. I feel bad for him, it's one thing when your father doesn't acknowledge your presence but it's another when he does to other's.

Bring on the updates.

*hugs*

x_yourkiss June 18 2005, 23:22:57 UTC

*hugs back* Wow, I really did hate this when I first posted it. But these comments are just so super nice and make me feel like I did do my intended job. Thank you so much, I will be posting the next chapter much sooner!!!!

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x_yourkiss June 19 2005, 03:07:45 UTC

I will! Thank you very much. And I have no idea how no one could love him.

graceful_lily June 19 2005, 01:57:37 UTC

Cute story, I liked the use of imagery, and the display of feelings.

x_yourkiss June 19 2005, 03:05:25 UTC

Thank you, I like your icon. (even though Chuck+David=eww) hehe. its still cute.