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Fic - Autumn

Oct 13, 2007 20:21

Autumn
jaeho; G
516 words.

And you play in the autumn leaves, laugh and smiling while red, orange, and yellow fly through the air. Play, laugh, and smile. He pushes you into the pile you raked less than an hour ago, and he’s sweaty, laughing, shining against the clear autumn sun. He flops down next to you, making leaves fly into the air while doing so ( Read more... )

p:jaejoong/yunho, *type:drabble/flashfic

Comments 47

guu_dammit October 14 2007, 07:42:13 UTC

wow... the color imagery was awesome, it made so much sense in my head.

I really liked this, albeit a little sad =)

x_voracity October 14 2007, 16:45:09 UTC

:D Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!~

enchanted1312 October 14 2007, 14:33:43 UTC

ahh, somehow the ending is really the ending that this fic should really have. when the kimchi was too spicy, i jst laugh when su pulls on jae's hair, i mean, imagine what jae will do after that. but i love this and yea, keeps the good memories in, and i do remmeber, mourn but not mourn too hard because it only makes the soul feels that it's harder to leave.

x_voracity October 14 2007, 16:46:27 UTC

Haha~ Well Junsu did mention is some interview, I forget which, that they threaten to pull Jae's hair if he doesn't cook ^^
Aww~ yeah, I'm glad you liked it :]

lavhire October 14 2007, 16:10:50 UTC

T___T sho sad but beautifully writen. T____T

uwahhhh I CRY T___T

x_voracity October 14 2007, 16:49:04 UTC

Aww, don't cry~ But I'm glad you liked ^^;

lavhire October 14 2007, 16:57:00 UTC

is there moar and the .gif is lovely I laff playful Jaeho *__*

x_voracity October 14 2007, 17:18:40 UTC

tehe, idk if there will be more. this was my first jaeho, ever and it all came from watching that GIF too many times.

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rain_streaked October 22 2007, 07:45:14 UTC

...

DDDDD: (that emoticon is me trying to say "OH GOD. HEART. HAS DIED. D:" but failing to find better words for it. D:)

♥

x_voracity October 22 2007, 13:13:40 UTC

....

:OOOO -tries to heal!-

♥! :D

mickey8 October 22 2007, 08:25:59 UTC

you kill the Jae >.<

though i can very well see just how alive YunJae is.. i'm sad.

like the simplicity in each lines. the words and the imaginary. everything is such sweet, innocent and simple love. a love that never fades even when one is dead.

nice bittersweet.

x_voracity October 22 2007, 13:14:25 UTC

I know ;___;
And ouioui, the yunjae lives. a love that surpasses time! lol
tehe, it was intended to be :)