Just one of the many recommendations from the utterly fabulous J. She also recommended the new scene from someone else's POV, and since I tend to go heavy on the Charlie/Dean ration (they get 2 chapters for every 1 of Sam's), I went with Sammy. Plus it also helps bring in some of the stuff that is going on internally with Sam, without breaking up the structure as much as I otherwise would need to.
Woo-hoo! Someone else besides me thought Snarky!Dean would be taking a picture.
I had originally written Charlie where she had done it on purpose, but it was rather politely pointed out to me that Charlie is cuter when she's a klutz. And, actually, it was much funnier this way. ;-P
And Flirty!Dean? Thought of you when I was writing it.
"Why don't you see if you can scrounge us up a dessert menu, Geek Boy?" Dean snapped. "And I've watched black and white flicks." "Yeah?" Sam raised his eyebrows. "Name one." "Godzilla," Dean returned. Sam rolled his eyes. "Godzilla movies don't count!"
*heee*
i'm still here, still reading, and enjoying the fact that Dean thinks he can be friends with a girl. :D
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Will comment properly after part 2.
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Just one of the many recommendations from the utterly fabulous J. She also recommended the new scene from someone else's POV, and since I tend to go heavy on the Charlie/Dean ration (they get 2 chapters for every 1 of Sam's), I went with Sammy. Plus it also helps bring in some of the stuff that is going on internally with Sam, without breaking up the structure as much as I otherwise would need to.
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Ooh, and Flirty!Dean makes an appearance. Always love it when he shows up ;)
Off to read the second part now...
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I had originally written Charlie where she had done it on purpose, but it was rather politely pointed out to me that Charlie is cuter when she's a klutz. And, actually, it was much funnier this way. ;-P
And Flirty!Dean? Thought of you when I was writing it.
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"Yeah?" Sam raised his eyebrows. "Name one."
"Godzilla," Dean returned.
Sam rolled his eyes. "Godzilla movies don't count!"
*heee*
i'm still here, still reading, and enjoying the fact that Dean thinks he can be friends with a girl. :D
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