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embroiderama May 12 2008, 01:58:54 UTC
*gratuitous pom icon usage*

You know I love this, but it's also making me want to see more of the modern-day version of River and Simon.

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elanurel May 13 2008, 06:55:22 UTC
I've thought about it myself, actually. Pre-storm before River became, well, touched... ;-P

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ashes quirkies May 12 2008, 03:31:22 UTC
Beautiful. The fragmented POV and repeated images are enthralling.
I love these three together. Every smile of Sam's brought one of my own, and the moment that River feels put back together almost made me clap. And Dean... Oh, Dean! A promise worth more than his soul? *weeps* Amazing character exploration of Dean and his deal.
Just beautiful.

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Re: ashes elanurel May 13 2008, 06:57:24 UTC
Thank you. This one wanted to come out more like a poem than a story. (But I think I scared people away with my summary. ;-P)

I love these three together.

I'm kind of digging them together myself. River and Sam sort of fell into River/Sam in this one and River's become a little more lucid, which is a happy thing. There was a lot more of Dean than I thought that there'd be but, hey...

Amazing character exploration of Dean and his deal.
Just beautiful.

*is blushing*

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darkmagic_luvr May 12 2008, 03:45:18 UTC
I love this. It's all so criptic and beautiful.

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elanurel May 13 2008, 06:57:54 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm never quite sure where I'm going to end up when I start writing something from River's POV...

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dharkapparition May 21 2008, 16:18:12 UTC
This one made me cry.

More please?

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elanurel May 24 2008, 17:31:34 UTC
I'm sorry about making you cry but...I did post a drabble on Thursday that's from Dean's POV.

And I'm working on a story from Sam's POV, which is currently around 4,000 words long.

*face palms*

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thomasmichalin October 9 2008, 15:40:36 UTC
(I'm sorry, but you're going to have to make your way to the end of it to get the full shock. Particularly interesting is the news from the Lebanese paper.

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