Beautiful. The fragmented POV and repeated images are enthralling. I love these three together. Every smile of Sam's brought one of my own, and the moment that River feels put back together almost made me clap. And Dean... Oh, Dean! A promise worth more than his soul? *weeps* Amazing character exploration of Dean and his deal. Just beautiful.
Thank you. This one wanted to come out more like a poem than a story. (But I think I scared people away with my summary. ;-P)
I love these three together.
I'm kind of digging them together myself. River and Sam sort of fell into River/Sam in this one and River's become a little more lucid, which is a happy thing. There was a lot more of Dean than I thought that there'd be but, hey...
Amazing character exploration of Dean and his deal. Just beautiful.
(I'm sorry, but you're going to have to make your way to the end of it to get the full shock. Particularly interesting is the news from the Lebanese paper.
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You know I love this, but it's also making me want to see more of the modern-day version of River and Simon.
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I love these three together. Every smile of Sam's brought one of my own, and the moment that River feels put back together almost made me clap. And Dean... Oh, Dean! A promise worth more than his soul? *weeps* Amazing character exploration of Dean and his deal.
Just beautiful.
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I love these three together.
I'm kind of digging them together myself. River and Sam sort of fell into River/Sam in this one and River's become a little more lucid, which is a happy thing. There was a lot more of Dean than I thought that there'd be but, hey...
Amazing character exploration of Dean and his deal.
Just beautiful.
*is blushing*
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More please?
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And I'm working on a story from Sam's POV, which is currently around 4,000 words long.
*face palms*
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