Fingers on the Hot Coal
Fingers on the Hot Coal
Disclaimer: The Winchester boys aren't mine, but I'd make Dean wear his boots all the time if they were.
Word Count: 10650
Pairings: Dean/OFC, Dean/OFC/Sam
Rating: NC-17 (Language, angst, sex)
Spoilers/Warnings: None for the show but the sex is graphic - including rimming and double penetration.
A/N: This was written ( Read more... )
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yay it's up! And so good too honey.
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But I suck. Between the filing project from hell and apparently getting slipped mushrooms, I'm barely hanging on in the brain department.
So I'm feeling a wee bit guilty right now about not getting to your beta tonight after all. :(
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This is gonna be the longest late shift ever now that I know this is here! *squirms*
*watches clock*
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That was wonderful. Perfect. The way you managed their emotions, all a mixed together mess of longing and guilt and worry. I love them, I adore your Dean here especially; I hadn't realised how I'd missed this 'verse.
And the hurt, oh man. The way you made their hurt deep and tangible so when the comfort came around it was all the more necessary and real. And scorching hot, did I mention that? 'Cause it really REALLY was. DEFINITELY made up for all the teasing you made me endure. ;)
It just WORKED, y'know? So well. You brought three of them together beautifully. Thank you, lady. I think it's completely lovely. ♥
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Oh, thank god. I was so worried you wouldn't like it because it was way more angsty than I had originally intended - what with the whole "they get drunk and have sex" scenario. (Although this was a lot more in character for them.)
I adore your Dean here especially; I hadn't realised how I'd missed this 'verse.
I miss the 'verse a lot, too. And I realized that Dean/Charlotte is probably my personal OTP. *weeps*
The way you made their hurt deep and tangible so when the comfort came around it was all the more necessary and real.
I really tried to ground the sex in what had happened and Sam seemed like the logical point to start from, given the whole "I'm turning into a monster" thing he's got going.
And scorching hot, did I mention that? 'Cause it really REALLY was. DEFINITELY made up for all the teasing you made me endure. ;)Whew. See, I was worried about the rimming and the DP as well; I've not written either of them before and you don't see a lot of either in het fics, so ( ... )
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And that the story lives up to the hype. ;-P
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That was great! I'm so in love with your characters and your story verse. Its just so amazing and really truly one of those things that you can come back to again and again and find something new to fall in love with.
As for the threesome... oops there went the rational thought again. AWESOME!
That is all I can get out, must go take a cold shower so that I can regain some higher functions ;)
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Well, I'm thrilled that you de-lurked. ;-P
That was great!
Thank you so much.
I'm so in love with your characters and your story verse. Its just so amazing and really truly one of those things that you can come back to again and again and find something new to fall in love with.
I am resisting the urge to send virtual smishes since I am, sad to say, quite fond of the SA 'verse myself. And have been frantically working out a writing schedule so I can update it more regularly.
As for the threesome... oops there went the rational thought again. AWESOME!
Whew... I've actually never written some of the, um, acts before so I'm happy people enjoyed that aspect of the story, too.
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*smishes*
And I did go back and change the Athena image, since I was too lazy to look for my copy of Hesiod's Theogeny. One doesn't want one's myths to be incorrect in a story that hinges on them. ;-P
You outdid yourself, Branni.
*is blushing*
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