On Unstable Ground

[x_saru_x]

Title: On Unstable Ground
Author: moi
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: Angst, Future!Fic
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: SME owns pretty boys and I own words. Talk about unfairness.
Summary: "Couldn't find any store open, I had to walk five blocks, can you imagine that?" is all Jonghyun gets to say, mouth numb and cheeks cold, before his hands linger on the door and

Comments

[siaht]

I'm shamelessly saving a spot considering this a great welcome back gift for me ♥

[x_saru_x]

All yours ♥

and damn, wtf, why are you guys so fast lol

[kaiahh]

I really like this!
Amazing writing, and that ending phrase kills me xD

[x_saru_x]

So glad you do!
Thank you :3

[mei_zi]

Gorgeous, sophisticated writing as usuaal. <3

[x_saru_x]

Thank you so much ;~; ♥

[r_hr_maniac]

I love the dialogue. It's scarce, but the story wouldn't have been half as good without it. I can't really say if they're OC or not, since it's a few years on and it's for each of us to decide how we think they'll be then. But...I didn't feel anything was off. At all ♥
I also like how Kibum doesn't really forgive him entirely, or maybe isn't even sure if there really is anything to forgive and...how Jonghyun just needs him. Lovely lovely ♥

[x_saru_x]

I'm very relieved to hear that :')
I was actually pretty nervous as to how they're portrayed here, especially Kibum, but it's so awesome to know they did it for you!

Thank you for reading ♥

[innocently_hot]

i wish it was a bit longer, i really want jjong to settle down but i guess he has? this is so lovely, written so perfectly. i'm glad that it's jongkey. i enjoy it very much. thanks for sharing this awesome work with us~ <3

[x_saru_x]

I honestly don't think Jonghyun was ever unsure as to where he's really supposed to be. It's just things that happen that help you realise some stuff.

The pleasure is all mine, thank you for reading!