Things that Go Bump in the Night [3/5]

[x_saru_x]

Title: Things that Go Bump in the Night [3/5]
Author: moi
Pairing: JongKey, OnTae
Genre: AU
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter
Disclaimer: SME owns pretty boys and I own words. Talk about unfairness.
Summary: "Take me places!" Taemin moans from his spot on the couch, eyes closing in complaint and mouth set on a constant pout.

Comments

[aaliyah_babygul]

spot

[x_saru_x]

Holy- Are you a ninja or something? I didn't even finish x-posting this LOL

[aaliyah_babygul]

Nah, I'm just super eager betch XD

[aaliyah_babygul]

Oh God, that was pure mindfuck. Taeminnie isn't that innocent after all and I love it. Sometimes I get this feeling when I'm watching videos, etc. Maybe he's a devil in angel's exterior XD

Oh and I want more Jongkey, like seriously. I want them to fuck already. Sorry for being impatient. I just really love this story.

Thanks for sharing.

[kyaa_kawaii]

oh my.

I was surprised when I saw that you had posted this, as you may understand :) Surprised and happy. Now I'm just curious, did it feel good to post this or were you still insecure about it?

First off, I could bitch about how I almost, almost, got the first spot but I won't because at least I got the second, woo 8D

THE FIRST APPEARANCE OF ONTAE CRYING OMG ♥
"Do you always mentally manhandle people?" the bartender asks with a fond smile and Taemin smirks as he leans over the counter, significantly decreasing the distance between them.

He whispers, this time. "It's only to preserve physical energy needed elsewhere."

I'm really liking your Taemin >:) He seems like a fun guy, Jinki sure is lucky, lol. My fave parts have to be the one I just quoted and the two last lines of Jjong and Key. I loved the short conversation between them, why can't I own, be with, own, be married to, ownknow people like OnTae and JongKey :( (you can add a lonely Minho there too)

And Saru, this is good, ♥, and I'm not only saying that because I'm

[x_saru_x]

I actually feel better already, thanks for asking =]

Haha omg, you really were excited about ontae getting some moments in this one, weren't you. It's actually your fault they're here, like this. I wasn't originally planning anything XD

So so glad you enjoyed =3 Thank you ♥ ah girl, I can feel you getting thinner, already lol

[kyaa_kawaii]

That's great :D

I were, and, tbqh, still am a bit, lol. Ooh, I see 8D Well thank you for putting in them for me then.

♥ But I can't feel it :(

[nuile]

*breathes out*
WOW!...

"Based on that fact alone," he starts again, pausing only to accept a glass of some pink liquid, right off the bartender's hands. "Who do you think did the seducing here?"
That just killed me!! xDDD Taemin, you jailbait! xDDD I KNEW it =P
But having such a brother... had no other choice, I guess xDD

That was pretty hot! <3 I mean... VERY hot! *still needs some time to breathe steadily*
Kibum knows his game, oh, he knows it so well *____________*

Thank you for the chapter, will be waiting for more!

[x_saru_x]

It's the genes, I swear XD ♥

And I hear you, Key is some crafty dude, here lol.
Thank you for reading! =]

[xxqod]

Kya~~~
-almost faints-
Jonghyunnnnnnn~~ XD
-incoherent-

Taemin is taking after Kibum for sure, in some way or another ^^
Gods, I love the Key/Jonghyun interaction even more!
Dancing is always a good thing ^^
Can't really wait for the next part ^^
<3 ~~

[x_saru_x]

Music brings people together, y/y? In interesting ways, too /cheesy eyebrow wiggle

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading^^

[honeyflavor]

Lol will it sound weird if I say in can see some of your snark hidden between Key's lines?

Oh dear, Taemin is so... not innocent D8 Poor Jinki, I already feel sorry for him D8 And the Jongkey D8 You should write moar D8 And include some Minho D8

Yeah ♥♥♥ D8

[x_saru_x]

lol can you, really? XD I guess it's sneaking itself into my fanfiction

Jinki's in a pretty bad position, alright. With a devil like Taemin and a bitch like Key, you can bet he'll go through hard times, but, eh.

And include some Minho D8
Just. So you lmao.

♥♥♥