Title: Anything to Win Character(s): Marcus Flint/Oliver Wood Prompt: Betrayal Rating: PG-13 Word Count: 844 Summary: Is wining at any cost really wining? Author's Notes: Not my boys... I only wish they were.
Hallu! Wondeful story! Poor Oliver. Go on, seduce Cedric. I`m sure it will help ;) It was really nice and sad. Great as always:) The line "he couldn’t really miss something he never had" was really nice. It is so true, but poeople often do that, they think of what could have happened and how nice it would have been. When they really don`t know if anything good had come out of it. Well. Keep going!!
(Sorry about my english, it`s not very well today)
Thanks! I thought that line fit Oliver well. He is so into quidditch that it seems to be the only thing that draws emotion out of him, so it made sense (to me at least) that he would be able to rationalize the Marcus stuff and put it aside with ver little effort and consintrate again on how to be Hufflepuff.
I love this. Okay, so the bit at the end was what really pushed me from "like it" to "love it" but the whole thing is great. The little bits like the heat, the use of the word 'playing'(perfection!), and the descriptions of secret rendezvous... those are what pulled me in and got me smiling. Wonderful :-)
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P.S. Marcus seducing Oliver, Oliver possibly seducing Cedric, does anyone else have a hankering for a threesome?
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Wondeful story! Poor Oliver. Go on, seduce Cedric. I`m sure it will help ;) It was really nice and sad. Great as always:) The line "he couldn’t really miss something he never had" was really nice. It is so true, but poeople often do that, they think of what could have happened and how nice it would have been. When they really don`t know if anything good had come out of it. Well. Keep going!!
(Sorry about my english, it`s not very well today)
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