I Take Yours Because You Want Me To

[koichiko]

Title: I take yours because you want me to
Author: koichiko
Pairing: Sakumoto, ShoxGackt
Rating: NC17
Genre: romance, angst
Length: 2,892
Disclaimer: The characters used in this story are not mine, but the story is.
Summary: From the “ Anon Kink Meme” - Anon wanted: Jun and Sho are in a relationship, Gackt knows Jun woud get hard watching his boyfriend getting

Comments

[cry1baby]

I loved it ^^
i liked how it showed discomfort and that not everything went perfectly
grr you good writer you haha

[koichiko]

Aaah, thank you!!
I'm kind of ashamed of this fanfic though ...
I guess I shouldn't really say this but this was terrible to write and I don't think it turned out in any way how I had planned it ^^"

Also - I had no idea how to write Gackt D:
And Sho became so OTP D: D:

Oh boy, the more I think about it, the worse I think it is LOL
But thank you so much for commenting, I know not many people will read this because of the pairing =)

[cry1baby]

haha well i liked it this way
and now i'm curious as to how it wouldve came out xD

lol yeah i wouldnt know what to do with him either, but i liked how you wrote it ^^

haha you are very welcome. i probably wouldnt have read it if someone else wrote it actually haha [since i loved the other one you did, i read this haha]

[koichiko]

xD Well, if I may tell you:
I actually wanted Sho to have sex with Jun in the end but after I came to that point it just didn't make much sense to write that, you know?

Okay, thanks =) I'm glad to hear it!

Oh love, thank you so much *-* That means the world to me!

[dddcandy]

I loved this!!!! :D

So heartbreakingly beautiful!!!

MOAR PLEASE? :D I would wanna see some make up SECKSSSSS between Sho and jun. :D

[koichiko]

Hey, thank you for commenting :D
I'm glad you liked it! I'll think about writing a sequel =)

[chesnee]

I think it's really well written and I liked it very much. The desperation and helplessness were very good so you should be proud of this (I really think so).

Well done and thank you for sharing!

[koichiko]

Ohh, thank you so much for your nice comment :D
I always appreciate it when people tell me my work was worth it :)

[jellybean6972]

I like that Sho wasn't into it and was only doing it for Jun. Like, Sho didn't all of a sudden change his mind and get really into being with Gackt. He loves Jun so he'll do anything for him.

Thanks for sharing :D

[koichiko]

Thank YOU for reading and commenting :)
I'm glad you liked it, I know it's not everyone's cup of tea =)

[yukitsubute]

I really enjoed the story, and I am sooo glad that Jun realized what he had done. I think he won't suggest something like that again.

Poor Sho, I hope he can overcome this night. :(

Thanks for writing this, I really liked it, especially the end

*hugs*

[koichiko]

Hey =) Thank you for reading! I'm really glad you liked it :D

No, I don't think Jun will ever suggest that again either - I think he really learned from this!
And don't worry about Sho :) He can bounce back from anything!