TRICAMPEÃO!!!

Jul 02, 2009 10:45

Wooooooooo!!! My team won the Brazil Cup!!! Wooooooooooooooo ( Read more... )

squee, soccer, writing

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wildcat88 July 2 2009, 15:40:26 UTC
Back away from the fic slowly. :) Unless you think the whump needs to be toned down (seriously? is that possible?), leave it where it is. Think outside the box a little. You don't have to go through complex medical detail. Show a teammate caring for another, maybe doing something unexpected - reading aloud from their favorite magazine, plotting a practical joke on someone else, typing emails for them, decorating their recovery area (with items not hazzardous in a hospital setting). I know you're tired of writing the fic, but don't give up now. Finish strong! You can do it.

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x_erikah_x July 2 2009, 15:46:40 UTC
I just had an epiphany. I changed the POV completely and that seemed to change everything.

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