Secrets Behind Masks - A Bleach one shot

[x_cybergoth_x]

Right back again with another one-shot, this time Bleach. this was yet another challenge from vulpes_demonica , this time in a fandom I have never attempted and while not a rare pairing, definitely an unusual dynamic. Making this believable as well as sticking to the japanese from the manga and anime has been a huge challenge. However I have learned a hell of a

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[kitsukatze]

Lovely, hun. Just lovely. There are still some stylistic aspects that bother me a bit, but that's the cultural dif, I guess. Never mind.

The story is great, nice plot progression, even nicer smut. And for some reason I'm beginning to like Kira. Never did before, never really like the roles voiced by Sakurai Takahiro, 'cept for in Kirepapa. They are too emo for me. Can anyone say "Cloud Stife"?

Sooo, when I'm I going to have to give you new ideas? And in which fandom this time?

[x_cybergoth_x]

Oi! No prompts, not until I have moved into the new house got a new job and settled down. June at least and a fandom I can handle. I have enough things to write at the moment to keep me busy for now. I have the next one in the tall, dark and vampy series hammering at the inside of my skull right now so that is next on the agenda.

[kitsukatze]

I wonder what Reno's feeling about his boss screwing tall, dark and handsome? *snicker*

[x_cybergoth_x]

yeah we have Reno to factor in, Rufus too, but not sure that is going to come in yet, maybe fic number three in the series... told you it was becoming a series! and its all your fault.

[mako_pretty]

*Makes incoherent drooly noises*

Seme-Mine, this is so made of win that it's deadly. I love the characterization, and the feel of it, and so sorry for not reviewing this before. It's made of epic sexy hotness.

“Then I will have to mark you again shan’t I?”

“Yes Izuru,” was Ichimaru’s happy reply.

Those lines especially made me happy. *hugs*

[x_cybergoth_x]

*blushes* not bad for my only Bleach piece, I surprised myself. I thought I kept them in canon character and yet shook it up a bit. And yes. Gin the masochist but actually incredibly devious, posessive Kira... its all quite a good mix

[mako_pretty]

Ooh, it is. I need to write them once I've caught up...

But the crack I'm currently writing is getting in the way!

[saluli]

I loved the dominant Kira, even if in the end is Gin that has the control.

[x_cybergoth_x]

thank you very much. Trying to keep it in canon was hard but that's what challenges are about right?