Blood Ties: Part III

[x_cybergoth_x]

Okay, I am back, but this time I come bearing warnings.

Warning: this chapter has extreme themes. If you do not like this, do not readI have written this chapter as I think it is highly important for how character act later on. But it is graphic. Hojo, doing what he does best. For those of you uncomfortable with all that, the story is written in

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[lyra_star]

OOOOOOH first comment!
♥ed the chapter!!! Very gruesome but brilliant!!!
LOVED IT!!
XD
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[x_cybergoth_x]

wow! can't believe I got a positive response! *chuckles* morbid lot these fans are. Thanks darlin' makes me feel better about being so mean. But I think I might have broken Vincent...

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[lyra_star]

NAH! vince cant be broken that easily, he is a strong strong MAN!! Dont worry you were not mean... vincent looks sexy anyway with the claws! Give him cloud and he'll be fine ♥♥♥
And you were not "that" mean, it was all for the story! XD

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[x_cybergoth_x]

*sniggers* obsessed I swear, I never promised that I will pair them up. And yes, all for the story.

[mako_pretty]

*wails into the pillow*
It's good, descriptive, dark, and well written but...
*wails more*

[x_cybergoth_x]

I said it would be dark. I can gt worse whn it comes to dark too. And I think I broke Vin... but I'll fix him. Poor bishie...

[mako_pretty]

I broke my Vin too, my fic just keeps getting meaner and weirder. We can have tortured bishies together.

Are you pairing Vin off in this fic?

[x_cybergoth_x]

yup, poor tortured bishies... and to be honest, I have no idea.

[honzeldafitz]

I'm loving this so much. So dark and creepy, and well written, and well, addictive! Must have more. *runs off to comfort Vincent*

[x_cybergoth_x]

Thank you. I am glad you are enjoying. Dark it is indeed. And poor Vinny, whatever did I do to him... There will be more be assured, a rescue is being mounted.

[garinarayne]

Impressively scary torture sequence. *plots Hojo's messy and painful demise... again*

And yes, I think you broke Vincent. I foresee much H/C in the future. Loved your characterisation of vampire Seph and Zack from the previous chapters, and eagerly await more kinky vampire sex.

Poor Vince. Poor Cloud. :(

[x_cybergoth_x]

*squees* sorry, odd reaction I know but horror is a favourite genre of mine and to have actually acheived 'scary' is wonderful.

I don't quite know what I am doing with Vincent in the main yest, but nothing much past the next chapter is clear to me, but even as I type I think the plot bunny is chewing on my ankle, as ideas are coming to me.

And I know, I hurt them didn't I?

[mlpbuttons]

Wow. Very intense. I thoroughly enjoyed(?) this chapter -- although that word makes me feel a bit squirmy. How about appreciated. I thoroughly appreciated this chapter. I think it was really important to see this side of things for the story flow and to build emotion. Bravo and keep brining it on!

[x_cybergoth_x]

I get what you mean, enjoying something so dark is uncomfortable at best. Nothing wrong with appreciation though. And yes, I think it was important too. I didn't wamt the rescue party to turn up and find the guys a mess and have no explanation other than 'Hojo is a git' which of course goes without saying. He's gonna get it good for this though...