Dressed for Success - Part five

[x_acid_queen_x]

Title: Dressed for Success - Part five
Pairing: Paolo Maldini / Zlatan Ibrahimovic, Lionel Messi / Andrea Pirlo, Andrea Pirlo / Adrian Mutu, Lionel Messi / Dani Alves, Iker Casillas, Cesc Fabregas, Alessandro Nesta, Adriana Maldini, Raúl Gonzales, David Beckham, Bojan Krkic 
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: You know the meaning of the word "fiction"?
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Comments

[_belbis]

Wtf Leo/Drea! I mean, I love the idea, and it's cute b-but POOR ADRIAN/POOR DANI EVEN IF HE LEFT ;_;~ But I liked it ♥ And hi Becks!

[x_acid_queen_x]

Haha, yeah, that was what I wanted to create LOL And next part they all will talk ♥
Haha, yeah, hi Becks LOL

Thanks :D

[nelzeben]

The Iker/Cesc beginnings were adorable :] Even if I kind of doubt that alligators like being petted :-p

And Becks is back! I'm looking forward to seeing what you're going to do with him.

But he had to admit that she still was damn sexy.
Haha, oh, what a manly reaction. Unexpected. I like it!

I also really enjoyed how Adriana was really civilized and you didn't go for the evil overlord type. She's classier than that ;]

Okay, now, you don't want me to criticize, but I think I can point out this: I think there was too much going on in the last scene. The break-up, sudden sex and then immediate regret - I think you could have fleshed that out a lot more. You kind of stopped describing stuff somewhere in the middle ;]

Also, I'm kind of happier with the banner now than I was when I finished it. Huh. Oh well. :-p

[x_acid_queen_x]

Thanks a lot. Haha, well, that's not just some boring alligator, that's STEVIE! xD

Haha, yeah <3

Aw I am glad about that ♥

Yeeeeeeeeah, I tried to keep her normal cause you said so before LOL Thanks, though ^^

No, you can critisize when you feel like it! And yeah, it was much, and I also agree that I stopped explaining in the middle but I wanted that, to leave some imagination up to the reader. But there will be some more sex explanations LOL in the following parts *grins*

Hahaha, well, glad you are! I love it ^^

[wurdig]

Good as always xD
But I suppose you have to had sth like running vein because its so much of plot here xD
♥

[x_acid_queen_x]

Thanks a lot ♥

xDDD It's okay so far LOL But yes, it can be a challenge sometimes :D