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Jun 24, 2009 01:53

new shit I wrote

this is about a dream i had
1.
my spine is a ladder that splinters your skin
climbing so sleepily, I'll stick me in
wooden and thin, I'll stick me in
down there it is raining,
and there's a song you are moaning
chirps and bells hold way for the morning
the world outside it is foaming
from the mouth of the core,
white seas begin murmuring ( Read more... )

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squeeze June 24 2009, 06:55:08 UTC
i like your writing a whole lot

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anonymous June 24 2009, 14:47:40 UTC
pretty dang good

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=) x3flythisforme June 24 2009, 21:06:13 UTC
thankya, means ahlaat

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lurid_poems July 1 2009, 22:18:23 UTC
these are all so great!
I can't pick a favorite.

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