Forbidden Love : Chapter 1 Part 2 : Crush At First Sight

Jul 15, 2010 00:49


(10 YEARS AGO)

04:09pm, 12th March, 2002
Dance room, SM Academy

It was a tight and tiring schedule for 15 year old Donghae, he never really liked it. Waking up… early, eating breakfast… in a hurry, off to school… trying to stay awake, then off to SM Academy for singing, dancing and acting lessons… tired as usual, back at home… studying and doing ( Read more... )

characters : yoona, my fanfic : forbidden love, characters : donghae, pairings : yoonhae

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mayshy July 14 2010, 19:59:54 UTC
omg this chapter was soooooo awesome
i really love ur writing style, it just suck that ppl right in and makes u be in the story keke.
i loved the quarreling with teuk and hyuk about whose closest to yoona and how everyone is talking about her keke.
hae... u so have a huge crush on yoong XD

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x3_strucked July 14 2010, 23:30:41 UTC
NGAWS, thank.you.so.much.mayshy.

kekes, yeps i always thought of Eunhyuk and Leetuek as the mischievous ones since they always bully yoona(of course in the nice way xD), so i thought i might make it just that in the story.

yesh Hae you indeed have a huge crush on Yoong.
but of course he still doesnt know what love is, so he's in doubt. kekekes, i wonder when he finds out?

anyways great talking to you agains mayshy.

hope to see you again .

Rebecca x

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anonymous July 15 2010, 02:02:58 UTC
this chapter is so awesome! i really like this chapter very much.....yoona help donghae to get up! it was so sweets and donghae was in love to yoona! can't wait for chapter 2! <3

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janet_yoonhae July 15 2010, 02:03:25 UTC
this chapter is so awesome! i really like this chapter very much.....yoona help donghae to get up! it was so sweets and donghae was in love to yoona! can't wait for chapter 2! <3

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x3_strucked July 15 2010, 02:16:21 UTC
thankyou so much janet_yoonhae.

kekekes, its great seeing you agains.

yeshh, i feel so sorry for making donghae go through such a embarrassing moment kekekes. Leetuek and Eunhyuk need a scolding xD

kekekes, donghae can't stop thinking about yoona x)

anyways thankyou sooo much agains for your wonderful comment.

chapter 2 will be coming out in a little while.
so see you then.

take care
Rebecca x

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loveshinesbest July 15 2010, 05:31:13 UTC
nawww!
This chapter is soo freaking cute! xD
Love at first sight! ^^

any one would have fallen for Yoona xD
even if she was just 11 ;)
and she is so caring towards others it cute! :D

great job on the chapter! :)

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x3_strucked July 15 2010, 05:45:57 UTC
awwwws, thankyou so much lovesshinesbest.

its so great to get a comment from you, and nice to meet you as well kekekes x)

sooo true, yes, yoona will always be beautiful no what age she is xD

thankyou thankyou .

your fanfics are really good as well btw.

anyways, its so good to be able to finally talk with you.

take care.

Rebecca x

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shelovessushi July 16 2010, 13:14:56 UTC
Wahhh one of the best YoonHae fics I have ever read! Seriously :)

Please tell me you'd be updating soon.. pretty pretty please! v(^_^)v

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x3_strucked July 16 2010, 23:02:29 UTC
wahhhhs TT___TT thankyou soooo much.

your fanfics are JUST AS AWESOME. xD

thankyou thankyou thankyou, you are too nice.

i have just started on chapter 2, so im not sure when ill be updating, but dw ill make it as sooooon as possible.

btws, did you read chapter 1 part 1? oO

anyways take care <3

Rebecca x

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shelovessushi July 17 2010, 12:52:05 UTC
yes I did read the first part :) Taec in your story is just pure evil lol :D

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x3_strucked July 17 2010, 13:03:39 UTC
kekekes sorry for asking...
i feel soo anxious about my fanfic...
its so nervewracking x)

ahhhs, yesh, i tried to make Taec seem like a bad boy, but he just turned out evil, but i guess the story might get more interesting that way... lol
and kekekes, i had always wanted to make Taecyeon the antagonist of the story. LOL

anyways great talking to you.

and also great job with your fanfic of how Yoonhae came to be, super cute <3

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