the five phials of dr poliakov - concluded

[wytchcroft]

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[wytchcroft]

thanks:) really, just - thanks:)) it's a relief to get a good comment for this and honestly, to have taken the time to read it all as you have done, i am very grateful.

the end was pretty important to get right - and in a number of ways... in fact numbers were pretty crucial throughout! LOL! :)
so again, i'm glad if it worked.
:)))

[wytchcroft]

yeah? thanks:)) but - i dunno, seems like a lotta 'was'', 'is' and 'it' juggling to me. i aint convinced.

[stoshagownozad]

I'd like to say you ended it up in a very unexpected way (for me at least), but in a way expected of a real victorian tale... and the sequence of endings sounds so musical :)))

[wytchcroft]

thank you! it's good to hear that:)) and really kind of you to read something so lonnnng!

this was a very difficult story to write!

[stoshagownozad]

I think - it should be not an easy task... it's so well done then!

[wytchcroft]

as they say, 'no pain - no gain'! LOL!:)))

well, i think it IS good to try sometimes... maybe, maybe to go a little beyond the limits, to stretch. (but not snap - ha ha ha!)

anyway, thank you again - and i am really glad you enjoyed it:)))