a word in your shell like

[wytchcroft]

PART ONE: in which there is a car and a castle...It was Nina's job to hold on to the neatly wrapped box with the cake inside

Comments

[autumnsea]

You have a clean, clear style. I find that necessary for a reader to get a grip on a story and mold it in their minds even as they read along.

I like this one so far and I shall continue reading on. :)