вавилонский голландец pt 4

[wytchcroft]

Part Four: Through Darkness...
Mariana pauses for a moment after slamming the hard metal door behind her to lean against it. Her jaw clicks as she counts. “Yes?” asks the captain.
She looks up, the old feral flash in her eyes and then she pushes herself out from the door again and she’s firm on her feet. “Time’s not laughing,” she says. And though

Comments

[stoshagownozad]

oh so many questions - and finall - just one - who are the parties of the story? The are like clouds - you imagine they are like camels... in an eyeblink they become like swallows. red eyes of Captain...

I like it. Very much like it. Waiting for the part 5

[wytchcroft]

thank you! :) your comment really cheered me up! :)

i hope your questions will be answered shortly...

(Jiggles hot mug of lemon and honey) Thanks again! :)

Really?!?!

[wytchcroft]

Thanks!! i mean, i'm doubtful and - hell, wow -
just thanks for taking the time to read and comment:):)
And i mean that sincerely.

(i'm sorry if there are any typos in there still!)

(blushes)

[wytchcroft]

Aww shucks:) thanks!
i hope you like the final chapter!