Comments | wytchcroft: Cinco de Mayo the 6th maybe mae west london etc

wytchcroft

Cinco de Mayo the 6th maybe mae west london etc

May 06, 2010 14:04

fic, science fiction, jerry cornelius, fan fiction, writer's block

Comments 4

charlie_bz May 6 2010, 13:50:54 UTC

Killer first sentence. I'm still kind of giggling at the United Benetton flag ref. :)

And the funny keeps going on! Also liked the image of the suicide bomber reaching for the detonator in his bra.

good stuff!

wytchcroft May 6 2010, 16:10:09 UTC

muchas gracias! :))

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LOL :) wytchcroft May 6 2010, 19:24:50 UTC

dear God no, that was quite enough :))

autumnsea May 7 2010, 06:16:47 UTC

Funny ... I like how you throw wit into your sentences and characters -- a lingerie suicide bomber with a detonator in the bra -- got to love that. ;))