root, branch and leaf - concluded

Apr 12, 2010 23:45

Quickly the two children darted forward and toward the light, they could hear a sort of frantic moaning coming from the glow ahead of them. As they got close they were astonished by what they could see. Another faery, of course, but what a faery! A fiery faery!

Were those legs or wheels turning furiously on the spot? Fred and Sue could not be sure ( Read more... )

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i_am_nyman April 14 2010, 03:51:53 UTC
sorry it took me so long to reply, mon ami!

great second and final parts! this is a great story and I think it could be fleshed out into something very publishable if you know the right artist!

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wytchcroft April 14 2010, 06:02:49 UTC
ta muchly!
nice of you to give this whimsy a go, appreciated my man, always :)))

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autumnsea April 14 2010, 08:44:44 UTC
Have you been published? If not yet, you should be. :)You do humour with panache. This was highly entertaining and I found myself chuckling all over the place! Very well done. :))

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wytchcroft April 14 2010, 17:44:39 UTC
thank you indeed for such a lovely comment, it's really nice that you enjoyed the story :))

published? no, i'm hardly in that league! LOL! :))

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