the solar windmill - part one

[wytchcroft]

Comments

[i_am_nyman]

mmm, very good!

the isolationsism Eva feels while walking in the anti-chambers and regarding the stuff left from previous missions(?) is great. i mean, its like built on top of the isolation she must feel living in space. Here she is, rummaging through the personal affects of other people, and she feels shut out from their lives too. i dunno, just a tone i picked up and enjoyed.

looking forward to more!

[wytchcroft]

grazie and yahtzee and much appreciated! :))

if the story works - by the time it's done - then what you mentioned about Eva, well, that should be the key...

Cheers! :)

[i_am_nyman]

http://www.theonion.com/content/news/idiom_shortage_leaves_nation_all

[wytchcroft]

Busted! LMFAO! :))

[sparklepony]

Hi. I'm a friend of Mike's (i_am_nyman), and he showed me this story of yours. Just thought I'd leave you a comment to let you know I liked part 1! The mood it left me with was similar to the mood I feel every time I read "The Cold Equations" by Tom Godwin -- one of my favorite sci fi stories. That's a good thing, I promise. You definitely know how to write sci fi. :)

hey :))

[wytchcroft]

well that's kind of him and mighty generous of you! cheers! :))

[cowboy_r]

You have fun icons, and are a good writer. I believe I must add you to my reading list... it's a moral imperative.

[wytchcroft]

mmmmmmmm sweeet flattery - bring it on! :)))

*is startled* you want me to add you back??

[cowboy_r]

I would never presume to tell another what they should or should not do with their reading list. If you find my entries interesting, by all means, feel free. If you don't, don't!

If you like fantasy, may I mention delicateart?

[wytchcroft]

mention away! always interested in a little art.

well, i took a swift look and - now we're friends.

[memeworrywort]

Eva. I'm sorry. But you will never have me. To me you're just some faggy girl and I need a lover with soul power. You ain't got no soul power.

[wytchcroft]

ah maybe i went too far, i was trying to avoid making her all 'super heroic' but....

still, nevermind, i'm British so fags are cigarettes - and i LOVE cigarettes!

[memeworrywort]

My previous comment was Of Montreal lyrics. In case you were wondering...

[wytchcroft]

fair enuff.

[stoshagownozad]

Oh I like that one especially - the old life splashing on Eva when she walks down the memory wall...

And of course she has a soul power :)

[wytchcroft]

and so do you! :))))))