the sleep facility - pt 2.

[wytchcroft]

two:

"What is that, like, a mantra or something?"

Listening down.

Whispers.

"Leachers, Seeders, Feeders, Breeders.” Just whispers, repeating.

“Maybe he’s crazed.”  and the other voices...

“Maybe you hit him too hard.” are louder.

Comments

[leannecassie_27]

wow, this is really good. youre an excellent writer. i looked at one of your previous posts. do you know how to speak Russian?

[wytchcroft]

hello interesting and invisible person:)
note how flattery causes me to turn instantly into super-Brit! *waggles charming eyebrows*

alas - no, i don't speak Russian.

and thanks again for the kind comments!:))

[wytchcroft]

here are some things in Russian, a mix of things by a few people, perhaps something will be of interest to you:
http://wytchcroft.livejournal.com/tag/translations

[stoshagownozad]

it's a Facility...
like awful Willie Wonka's Factory?
in a dead ship...
wow I am waiting for the rest of the story!

[wytchcroft]

ага! именно так!:)

and thanks for reading:))

[leannecassie_27]

hi, you probably dont know me, but im besher's friend. your welcome(for the comments). by the way, septimus severus is an interesting Roman emperor. but, of course, i think almost every famous Roman person is interesting. except Caligula(i dont have to explain myself on that one). also, thanks for the russian articles. anyway the reason why i was pestering our dear friend besher for roman information is because im writing a Roman novel, and i need as much info as i can. but sometimes when i do receive it, the authors dont point it exactly, and/or use fancy elaborate words(that i usually know the meaning of), and manage to disquise the answer by using them. although gathering the information can be almost as difficult sometimes. thats when decide to ask Jennifer about it and see if she knows.

[wytchcroft]

well, i hope you find what you need - good luck!:))

[mr_stapleton]

it's great! i read it as a poem, really - the second part even more than the first - those short lines, short-cuts sometimes :) i enjoy it!

[wytchcroft]

hey thanks! i was hoping that aspect worked and i wasn't at all sure.

cheers!:))

[leannecassie_27]

i also completely agree with you on the Shakespeare comment. a rose by any other name will smell just as sweet. wasnt that in Romeo and Juliet? im sorry if you were confused when i asked if you knew how to speak Russian. its just that when i saw the russian words i thought you were Russian(so so sorry, my mistake). see, i am a former immigrant(im an American citizen now) that came from a country that is close to a large body of water called the Caspian Sea. my country is just south of Russia, and during the Soviet times, it was kind of occupied by the Russians until 1991, and it really wasnt til 2000, i think, that my countrys people started to really speak their native language. naturally i learned Russian as my first language, and my native language(a variation of the Turkish language, i think) was my second language. although i resent the fact that a foreign country's language was my first, i dont hold anyone responsible. my grandmother was a Russian, after all. i just dont like its country's government a lot(or my country's),

[wytchcroft]

LOL! UK Govt is completely corrupt.

[betsycontent]

unfortunately, all governments are corrupt. the u.s. was especially corrupt under george w. bush, but is hopefully healing a bit under the obama administration.

[wytchcroft]

plus the man has ninja skills!:))

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6sV3_LUBGTU