вавилонский голландец длительный new Babylon Dutch redrafted pt.1

[wytchcroft]

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[aliasse]

Love it. So atmospheric. Full of mystery and moments of crytal clarity. Falk is very engaging.

You use punctuation differently from me. (Remember your feedback to me, that was about punctuation too.) You use commas as a harder stop than I do - often I'm expecting a full stop instead. And don't make any puns about that, I mean it (scary primary teacher's frown).

Re: why kids rule!

[aliasse]

Thanks for looking that up for me! That is so beautiful! How old were these children?

[wytchcroft]

age 5 or so. if i remember right.

[aliasse]

Ahhh. I love the way you spoke to them. I get the feeling you loved it.

[wytchcroft]

oh i surely did!:))))

Re: chapter X - in which i waffle

[stoshagownozad]

painful thing, painful example... - oy...

Re: chapter X - in which i waffle

[wytchcroft]

oh i agree with you! it is painful indeed:(