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FIC: Hear Her Calling (10/14)

Oct 29, 2007 21:30

Title: Hear Her Calling (10/14)
Author: Wysawyg
Summary: When a veteran marine friend of their father calls the boys for help when mysterious deaths start occurring on his fledgling cruise, it's not long before the boys end up in over their heads. Hurt!Dean and some Sammy!whumping for good measure.
Disclaimer: The Winchesters belong to Kripke and the CW. ( Read more... )

hear her calling, longshot, fic

Comments 15

pinkphoenix1985 October 29 2007, 22:08:11 UTC

great part!!! poor Sam :D I pity Dean when he wakes up what with the lies that Sam is spending about him! can't wait until the next part!

wysawyg October 30 2007, 22:07:28 UTC

Dean is probably going to have enough to worry about with his reputation plus, with a face like Dean's, who is really going to worry about some rather strange habits!

Poor Sam having to do all the leg work for his brother!

twigletmoo October 29 2007, 22:26:17 UTC

Oooo, sounds like we're about to get some more action! Hopefully Dean will get better and put Libby in her place, she sounds like a Paris Hilton type figure of fun!

wysawyg October 30 2007, 22:08:53 UTC

Yep, it's all action from the next chapter on. Sorry the last few have been a bit slow! Dean will definitely be right in the thick of it.

I didn't base Libby on anyone but my slightly twisted imagination, she was fun nonetheless.

ex_egorstan October 30 2007, 00:00:42 UTC

Okay, a few things to say this time.

1. I'm a Dean girl, always have been, always will be and there wasn't any Dean in this part - that said, I absolutely loved it! Sorry Dean but Sam was just so ... Sam: adorable, funny and, and ... so Sam.

2. Loved Barbie. Every time the ooh's kept getting longer I laughed louder! (I even snorted)

3. Dan is so nice - I'm expecting him to do something nasty, or die.

4. There's only four parts left. Can you, by any chance, write another ten parts - because it's too enjoyable to end.

So enjoyed this part - even without Dean.

wysawyg October 30 2007, 22:10:52 UTC

1 - I know. I was tempted to edit some Dean into this chapter but it would have been fairly gratituous. Not that gratituous Dean is a problem but still.

2 - Yeah. Barbie was a lot of fun to write!

3 - Poor Dan. He was originally very much a bit part but he's demanded sneaking into more and more of the fic.

4 - Sorry, only four parts. Hopefully the ending will make up for the fact it's over (if that makes sense0

Thanks for the comment.

warriorgal October 30 2007, 00:38:30 UTC

Great update. Did miss Dean though. Dean is so gonna kill Sam about the Libby thing.(the girl knows basically 1 word Oooh)Hee!

Can't wait for the next update.

wysawyg October 30 2007, 22:11:38 UTC

I missed Dean. I thought about adding a scene in but the next few chapters have Dean back in full focus again.

erinrua October 30 2007, 05:12:16 UTC

Ooooooooooh!

*G* No, seriously, great chapter. I love it when Sam gets his geek on and starts being creative. Though it sounds like things are gonna get sort of scarier soonish, huh? :-s
Cheers ~

Erin

wysawyg October 30 2007, 22:12:46 UTC

Nooooo, not an oooh.

Yep, Geek Sam is the best flavour of Sam. Things are going to get, I dunno about scarier, but definitely more action in the last few chapters!

Thanks for your comment.