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FIC: Hear Her Calling (6/14)

Oct 16, 2007 20:30

Title: Hear Her Calling (6/14)
Author: Wysawyg
Summary: When a veteran marine friend of their father calls the boys for help when mysterious deaths start occurring on his fledgling cruise, it's not long before the boys end up in over their heads. Hurt!Dean and some Sammy!whumping for good measure.
Disclaimer: The Winchesters belong to Kripke and the CW. I ( Read more... )

hear her calling, longshot, fic

Comments 19

pinkphoenix1985 October 16 2007, 20:41:52 UTC

oh wow! I hope that Sam gets Dean back to the infirmary safely without Dean trying to kill himself

wysawyg October 18 2007, 17:03:56 UTC

Considering that Dean has got a broken arm and got slammed into railing, it probably won't be a huge challenge. It's the after Sam has to worry about!

joyofreading October 16 2007, 21:07:05 UTC

wysawyg October 18 2007, 17:04:27 UTC

And here I was thinking I was being sneaky. Of course it wouldn't be much of a story if Dean got away once and that was it!

gatorpez October 16 2007, 21:27:21 UTC

Okay, you were right, I definitely have to say it after this part...oh Dean.

I liked how you tied in the episode "Hunted", and how you had Dean get out of the restraints. :-)

wysawyg October 18 2007, 17:05:26 UTC

Oh Dean all around!

I can't remember if Hunted had just aired when I wrote this chapter or something else made it stick in my mind.

jade_bell October 16 2007, 21:39:29 UTC

Another great chapter! I like the descriptions of the music Dean hears.

wysawyg October 18 2007, 17:05:58 UTC

Thanks! There's lots more quasi-musical description to come so I hope it doesn't get boring!

warriorgal October 16 2007, 21:40:57 UTC

Yay! I always look forward to your updates. I loved this chapter. I loved Sam telling Dean about Jessica, Dean really would tease him him if he had heard all that.
I liked the following:
Dean leaned back against the steel headrest of the bed, “It’s a hard life being this damn sexy.” (That is SO Dean, hugs the boy)

“Do I need to give him a sedative? He seems to be delusional.” Janey deadpanned to Sam. (loved the docs comment to Sam, that was too cute)

Poor Dean he can't escape the Mermaid's song. Poor baby..hugs him again.

Was totally relieved when Sam stoped him from going over the railing again.

I love your writing and can't wait for the next chapter.

wysawyg October 18 2007, 17:07:01 UTC

Hee. Janey is well-used to dealing with a bunch of Marines so Dean... isn't that hard to adjust too!

And Dean ain't getting away from the monster that easy. After all, if you got your claws into Dean, would you let go?