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FIC: Hear Her Calling (4/14)

Oct 10, 2007 21:16

Title: Hear Her Calling (4/14)
Author: Wysawyg
Summary: When a veteran marine friend of their father calls the boys for help when mysterious deaths start occurring on his fledgling cruise, it's not long before the boys end up in over their heads. Hurt!Dean and some Sammy!whumping for good measure.
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hear her calling, longshot, fic

Comments 16

pinkphoenix1985 October 10 2007, 20:53:05 UTC

great part!! I especially liked drunk Dean thinking that the 'barman' was into him hehe

wysawyg October 11 2007, 17:21:16 UTC

Well, it's a natural assumption when the barman gets in bed with you... and you are too drunk to realise it's your brother.

That was one of those sections that Dean got away from me when I wrote. It started off a nice, simple Dean sitting in the bar and then he started drinking without bothering to ask me first and suddenly he was three sheets to the wind and babbling randomly.

Thanks for the feedback.

pinkphoenix1985 October 11 2007, 18:58:15 UTC

lmao!!! That is my new favorite funny scene of the brothers- even tops the ones which are actual canon :D

joyofreading October 10 2007, 21:11:35 UTC

wysawyg October 11 2007, 17:22:56 UTC

Thanks. I liked writing that. I figure Sam and Dean are used to each other enough that Sam would have been able to work out from Dean's behaviour what was going on!

I was probably pushing plausibility a little with Dean not recognising Sam but I figured I could get away with it for the purpose of a laugh! And no-one is throwing stones yet so I think I got away with it.

Thanks for the feedback.

apieceofcake October 10 2007, 21:52:24 UTC

2 days and he hadn't told Sam!! Oh..Dean..LOL!

Drunk Dean was funny, but Sam deserves Sainthood for putting up with him ;-)

wysawyg October 11 2007, 17:24:10 UTC

He probably started off thinking 'Okay, I'll tell Sam now... oh wait, I'll just check the journal again in case I missed something. No point worrying Sam for no reason' and so on until two days had eaten themselves up.

Sam definitely deserves a sainthood. Trying to watch out for drunk people is not fun!

Thanks for the feedback.

warriorgal October 10 2007, 22:40:32 UTC

Hee I loved this line..Disney had obviously corrupted his brain. (because Disney most definitely corrupted mine) Loved the banter between the brothers. Dean not recognizing Sam and thinking the barman was being forward. Hopefully Dean survives his hangover and Sammy's wrath. Great chapter.

wysawyg October 11 2007, 17:25:53 UTC

Disney is utterly corrupting. I once formed a whole theory on it, about how nearly every Disney movie had at least one dead/absent parent and it's all sugar-coated.

Have you ever read the Hans Christian Anderson version of The Little Mermaid? Because it's almost completely different from the Disney (and much better I think. No giving kids unrealistic expectations from life).

Thanks for the feedback.

warriorgal October 11 2007, 21:30:04 UTC

Have you ever read the Hans Christian Anderson version of The Little Mermaid?

No, I've never read this version, I've heard that it is different from the Disney version. I think I'll go and get the book so I can read it.

Just a little side note my sister's ex sister-in-law edited all the bad guys out of all the Disney movies so her kid wouldn't see them. I mean come on.. how demented is that?

apreludetoanend October 10 2007, 23:24:11 UTC

This:

It was the previously unspoken Winchester rule. Their dad had always slept between Dean and the door and Dean slept between Sammy and the door.

Yes. So awesome.

wysawyg October 11 2007, 17:41:48 UTC

Hmm, wonder if I should do a oneshot 'bout Sam's first night at Stanford when he realises there's no-one between him and the door.

Glad you liked that rule.