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FIC: Hear Her Calling (13/14)

Nov 19, 2007 21:05

Title: Hear Her Calling (13/14)
Author: Wysawyg
Summary: When a veteran marine friend of their father calls the boys for help when mysterious deaths start occurring on his fledgling cruise, it's not long before the boys end up in over their heads. Hurt!Dean and some Sammy!whumping for good measure.
Disclaimer: The Winchesters belong to Kripke and the CW. ( Read more... )

hear her calling, longshot, fic

Comments 16

pinkphoenix1985 November 19 2007, 22:20:58 UTC

excellent part!! I am glad that the boys are okay and back on the ship!

wysawyg November 20 2007, 19:34:43 UTC

Same here. They've both had a helluva week! Don't think they'll be signing up for anymore cruises anytime soon!!

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twigletmoo November 19 2007, 23:36:44 UTC

Lovely update, glad the boys are all okay!

wysawyg November 20 2007, 19:36:38 UTC

I'm glad too! I certainly put them both through the wringer (I think my muses are mad at me). Love the icon, makes me want to dig my Dark Angel boxsets out!

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warriorgal November 20 2007, 00:04:33 UTC

Great update. So glad the boys are okay.

Loved that Dean was launching ice chip rockets at his brother. That was too cute.

wysawyg November 20 2007, 19:37:17 UTC

Of course, put something in Dean's hands that he can throw and he will inevitably throw it at his brother, especially when his voice isn't working too well!

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ex_egorstan November 20 2007, 00:41:40 UTC

It began with a rather girly noise and then Dean immediately tried to curl onto his side, pulling at the numerous wires and leads that currently made him into a poor man’s Terminator.

Now this line - is why I love this story! Another great part!

wysawyg November 20 2007, 19:37:54 UTC

*grins* Thanks! I rather like that line myself too, poor Dean!

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charis_kalos November 20 2007, 00:43:48 UTC

Yay! Loved the vision of little Dean always having to go one better than little Sammy illness-wise. I'm going to miss this story when you post Part 14. (But post soon anyway!)

wysawyg November 20 2007, 19:39:39 UTC

It makes you feel sorry for John. Not only did he have to deal with Sammy coming down with the sniffles but with the knowledge that any minute now Dean was going to look like death warmed up.

I can almost see him trying to keep the boys in separate rooms, just in the hope of keeping one of them, only to check on Sammy in the middle of night and finding Dean already there keeping watch on his brother and undoing all John's good work!

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charis_kalos November 20 2007, 21:02:41 UTC

In one of my stories (Five times Dean tried to read The Lord of the Rings) I had the parallel situation seen in Dean's memories after Sam went to college:

"A four-year-old fighting their Dad, who was trying to separate them so Sammy wouldn’t catch Dean’s cold. A nine-year-old sitting by a tonsillitis-infested Dean’s bed, ready to run any errands Dean might have. A sixteen-year-old leaving Dean’s bedside only to scour Black Rock for things to cheer him up. Anytime Dean was sick Sam had been there, beside him, leaving only to do something for him. Had Dean ever thanked him?"

I completely believe that John would have tried to keep the two of them apart so that they wouldn't infect each other and that it would never work.