Somewhere I Have Never Travelled, Gladly Beyond - Chapter 12

[wyntermute]

So hesitant to write the next chapter -- it's a crucial one. :O

(But I rather like the way this one turned out!)

Title: Somewhere I Have Never Travelled, Gladly Beyond
Fandom: Naruto
Type: Multi-chaptered
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings: Deidara/Sakura
Word count: 4,891
Summary: Naruto had been bragging all day that his new jutsu was his best yet. Sakura

Comments

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[the_mccutie]

You make me fall in love with this couple a little more each chapter. And I'm already pretty far gone, so that's saying something. <3

Sakura's inner conflict is just so believable, and Dei's mini-tirade on fashion sense made me laugh. It's all the little details that I love so much about this story, lines like Deidara didn’t look at his fingers as he sliced and peeled vegetables with the telltale efficiency of a ninja with a sharp object and the part where Sakura stomps on Dei's foot when he's laughing at her. It just makes the story come alive, and no matter how long the chapter is, it's never quite enough, I always want more.

Wonderful writing. ♥ As always, I look forward to the next installment.

Sorry about the lateness of my response and the use of the RP journal. ^-^;;

[wyntermute]

Glad you enjoyed it! :D

You know, I want more of the story too. :O Most of the time I write Somewhere because I'm curious to see how it's all going to play out. (Which is stupid, because I know how it turns out... Oh silly self...)

(I wish I had as much motivation for university as I did for this story. :S )