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wynter_rebel

Taken Chapter 3/10

Mar 13, 2006 02:39

Chapter three is here! Yay!

Warnings: Some strong images in this chapter. You've been warned.
Rating: R

( Chapter Three )

fanfic, storytaken

Comments 14

kiraboshi March 13 2006, 07:54:33 UTC

Wow. Think of all the psychological things they're gonna go through, knowing what has happened to the other missing people.

I hope Sam gets there quickly, but you know he isn't...their farm isn't a slaughter house. Damn.

wynter_rebel March 13 2006, 08:06:55 UTC

Bwahahaha! :) *evil laughter echoes*

mmarinov March 13 2006, 09:23:49 UTC

Haha! I hust finished reading the novel "Slaughterhouse Five" Okay, so an *actual* slaughterhouse wasn't involved, but you get to show me what it *would* involve if the title had been literal.
I love how fast you got this next chapter up - if you can keep up this pace I will officially make you my god; I will worship you and throw rose petals at your feet. Human sacrifices? Not a problem. :D
Great chapter!

wynter_rebel March 13 2006, 19:04:43 UTC

I've never read that, but I've meant to for a long time. I'm actually starting to read "The Jungle" which is about a meat packing plant.

Oooh, rose petals...sweet. :) I'll try to update again tonight, but I have class (ick) so we'll see how that goes, lol. But hopefully I'll be able to keep up a steady pace of updating. :)

koyote19 March 13 2006, 13:22:13 UTC

wow. Serious mental scarring indeed. Poor guys.
Good chapter though. Looking forward to seeing what you put them through next, while they wait for Sam to figure out where they are.

wynter_rebel March 13 2006, 19:10:07 UTC

Hehe, hopefully I'll be able to write the next chapter after class tonight. Or maybe a little bit during class, lol. :)

Cynthia anonymous March 13 2006, 22:43:22 UTC

Excellent chapter. I'm so happy that you updated so quickly. Very well written. I'm really wondering how Dean is going to get out of this one. Can't wait to read more magic written from your pen. Happy writing (for our sakes anyways :P )

Re: Cynthia wynter_rebel March 14 2006, 03:05:20 UTC

Why thank you! I'm about to start working on the next chapter. I'm not sure if I'll finish it tonight or not. I've got to go into work tomorrow. So we'll see.

a_decembrist March 14 2006, 02:21:48 UTC

Hey, just here to bombard you with comments so that you write fast. As fast as humanly possible, if not faster. Love the story so far!

wynter_rebel March 14 2006, 03:11:42 UTC

Ack! I'm gonna start writing the next chapter right after this. :-D I don't promise to get it up tonight yet, because I'm gonna try to go to be early since I have work in the morning (possibly my last day, depending on how this "chat" with my boss goes, lol.) So we'll see.