The Man in the Dark Chapter 5/10

[wynter_rebel]

Sorry this took so long! I went out and bought a new computer game and have been playing it like an addict. :) This chapter's more plotty stuff. NEXT chapter will be action, action, action. So don't be discouraged. :)

Spoilers: If Missouri means nothing to you.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: The boys find out what they're dealing with.

Comments

[rockangelxoxo]

I hate you. and thats all there is to it. You better get the next chapter if you want love *refuses to speak to penny until she gets out the next chapter*

[wynter_rebel]

LOL! Well I'm sorry! And you're gonna have to wait for like a week. I won't be able to get on a computer for that long. *dies.* I think I'll go through withdrawl, lol.

[rockangelxoxo]

*gasp* I think I am going through withdraw with you. print out like lots of stories-completed-to tide you over. Or rather go to your school computer lab. At least that way you get to see the updates, you just can't save anything.

[lifeinsomniac]

oh...so...good.....

sorry, i usually like to give more indepth comments, but i'm currently coughing up a lung thanks to a flu. fever high. getting dark.

but i did give a phlegm-y chuckle to Dean's remark about the kid needing a hobby. heh.*hack!*

anyway, PLEASE keep going!

[wynter_rebel]

I hope you feel better! :) The flu is icky.

I plan to keep going with this story. Hopefully I'll get another chapter done tonight, but then it's gonna be a week before I can do another one. Turning 21 and all...I'm gonna be drunk from Tuesday morning all the way until Saturday night. ;) Or that's the plan anyway. Pray for my liver.

Thanks for the nice comments. This story is giving me a shit ton of problems, with every chapter making me feel less and less confident. But hopefully the next chapter will change all that. Action I can do. Stuff like this, I have a hard time with.

[mmarinov]

Oooh, intrigue, intrigue and more intrigue! And, aw, Dean's so adorable with his uncomfortable soft spot for kids.
Looking forward to an update, but have a great 21st! You Americans, with your legal drinking age being three years after us - you have much bar crawling to do to make up for it!
Have fun! :)

[wynter_rebel]

Thanks! :)

And yeah about the drinking age. And if I didn't know why it was 21 and not 18, I would probably be annoyed. But as it is, I've already done my fair share of drinking. But now, I'll just be able to do it in bars, lol. My brother is taking me out on my birthday, but then when I get back, that Saturday I'm going up to see my friends and...well let's just say I'll have fun but I won't remember a thing, hehe.

Ah the power of drunkeness.

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[anonymous]

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