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wynnetimate

Low-life, High-strung (5/12)

Jul 02, 2010 00:19

Title: Low-life, High-strung (5/12)
Pairing: Everyone/Jaejoong
Length: 2,516w (11,772 total)
Summary: Jaejoong, a successful internet porn star, returns to his estranged family after the death of his mother leaves some loose ends.

Previous Chapters: Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 | Chapter 4

( Some things don't heal. Some things don't just fucking go away. )

fic: low-life high-strung, length: more than 10 000 words, status: complete, fandom: dbsk, content: smut, pairing: yoochun/jaejoong

Comments 29

yogibear1989 July 2 2010, 03:34:08 UTC

That was not boring AT ALL! I really love the way you portray Jae (even with how obviously fucked up he is). But how could you leave us hanging on what Junsu said. And Yunho is coming back right? I loved the chemistry between Ho and Jae, how yunho was all domineering then very sweet. Can't wait till next chap.

wynnetimate July 3 2010, 13:02:11 UTC

Thanks so much!

I love Yunjae too much for him to be a walk-on character, even in a primarily Jaesu story. So yes, he will be returning. :3

<3

lily_yoosu July 2 2010, 03:41:53 UTC

ohh damn right it was freaking hot! mannn
maybe Junsu said something like....
"Dont u dare touch Chun. he's mine" or "Chun satisfied me more than u did" hahahah

wynnetimate July 3 2010, 13:02:42 UTC

Hahah, thanks. Don't wanna give it away, so you'll just have to wait to find out. XD

han_seoul July 2 2010, 05:01:11 UTC

Oh my god! Soooooo dramatic :I
I wonder what Junsu said! Man, I want sujae together again XD even though incest is quite wrong :P
And wow, Jaejoong's really mad at Yoochun! I hope we find out why soon
Thanks and can't wait until next update! :)

wynnetimate July 3 2010, 13:04:08 UTC

You're welcome? Or I suppose thank you for reading!

I've said it before: incest irl is capital Wrong, but in fanfiction it's somehow really hot. Dunno why that is.

<3 Thanks again.

alicachen July 2 2010, 09:57:49 UTC

wow, how could you say Boring for the HOT smut between JaeChun...
this is become more interesting, can't wait for the update...
thank you

wynnetimate July 3 2010, 13:04:49 UTC

Thanks for reading!

Glad you liked the little bit of smut, even though it was pretty rushed and unsatisfying.

sarahjolie July 3 2010, 01:17:49 UTC

A/N: This chapter is mostly plot, and so it sucks and is probably very boring. Sorry 'bout that.

what?what????this chap is fucking hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wynnetimate July 3 2010, 13:05:50 UTC

Haha, thank you for assuaging my fears. :)

I usually write really late, and so my brain is tired and I end up thinking everything I write is crap.

Thanks for reading! <3