Call Me Oppa (12/?)

Aug 21, 2011 22:19

Title: Call me Oppa (12/?)
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 4,641w (51,208 total)
Summary: "Some people are just unlucky."

Previous Chapters: Chapter 1 | Chapter 2  | Chapter 3  | Chapter 4  | Chapter 5  | Chapter 6 |
Chapter 7 | Chapter 8 | Chapter 9  | Chapter 10  | Chapter 11

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fic: call me oppa, pairing: onew/taemin

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imvus August 22 2011, 02:46:09 UTC
OMG!!!!! SPOT (don't kill me)

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imvus August 22 2011, 03:23:15 UTC
I am so glad you posted!!!

At first I was wondering how Jinki was going to beat a bus and if it was that close, he could have already walked there. The video, though blurry was very beautiful.

Favorite part:

**In the boys' changeroom, Jinki watched Taemin unwind the tape from his ankle and change into jeans and a tee shirt. Taemin was deep in thought, and he startled when Jinki touched his shoulder to get his attention. Smiling apologetically, Taemin sank into Jinki's open arms, rubbing his cheek against the cotton of Jinki's shirt and whispering, "Oppa."**

OMG!! How Taemin immediately relaxes into "Oppa" when they are alone is comforting and beautiful.

And Taemin's compassion for Jinki... that he can feel Jinki's pain and sadness that his father cannot always remember him, when he, himself has gone through so much worse. And yes, wouldn't it by nice if Taemin's father could do the same. That awful excuse of a man, doing that to Taemin.

So worth the wait! :)

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stjoan4eva August 22 2011, 02:48:33 UTC
So worth the wait, oh my god...

This punched me in the gut, you continuously stun me in the best ways. Now I'm addicted to this story all over again.

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dongwook August 22 2011, 02:53:37 UTC
Omfg i miss you.

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kyttenfae August 22 2011, 02:55:10 UTC
*wibbles!!!* Oh babies, sweet little babies, how they need snuggling! I'm so happy you updated, though, seriously. *flailhug* I love some of the descriptions in this, especially Tae dancing. <333

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shineesbright August 22 2011, 03:04:52 UTC
Spot. Seeing this has made me as happy as pie! *・゜゚・*:.。..。.:*・'(*゚▽゚*)'・*:.。. .。.:*・゜゚・*

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shineesbright September 8 2011, 00:07:50 UTC
The dream sequence was fantastic ~ & this chapter didn't necessarily make me as happy as pie, w(hy)tf did I say that? judging myself rnbut it fit's the tone of the story - bloody depressing ; u ; I kid, but seriously this fic is sublime... just well done.

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