Project Revision: Free Fall. Draft of Part X. Obi-Wan and Yoda talk - a lot.

Jan 28, 2012 14:10


Author's note: Yay! I finally typed this monster up.  Transferring things from pencil gets kinda cumbersome sometimes.  Anyway, this follows from the previous chapter draft (on which 

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character: obi-wan kenobi, character: ryn orun, writing, fic, character: yoda, project revision: freefall, fandom: star wars

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wyncatastrophe January 29 2012, 00:07:00 UTC
Thanks for commenting! I keep on saying this, but let me reiterate it once more: there is no need for a scientific, supernatural, or otherwise fantastic explanation for Ryn's sexual development and desires at this stage in her life. Perfectly normal human girls experience the same thing at the same age all the time. I've seen it happen plenty of times myself. It is in no way unusual for a girl of twelve or thirteen to have a period and experience sexual attraction and/or arousal. Really. I promise, I swear, this is well within the range of normal human development. What she does have is a psychic attraction to him, which most human beings doing experience at all for the same reasons that they don't go to Dagobah and move rocks with their minds - and that's the part I am most interested in exploring, re: Ryn's responses to Anakin and her own emotional development ( ... )

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wyncatastrophe January 29 2012, 00:09:17 UTC
LOL! Well, I'm glad you liked it. I hope you'll get to articulate something later; your comments are occasionally frustrating but often helpful and always thought-provoking. I find myself looking forward to them when I post something. Speaking of: did you read the previous chapter at all? There wasn't much in it but I have anxieties about my Obi-Wan dialogue.

And there is a line in this chapter that was written just for you, I cannot believe you didn't pick up on it! Hmph! Hehe.

Oh! And I finished watching Goblet of Fire, just tonight - it's been crazy the last few days!

Hope you're having a good weekend! :)

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