First Night

[wyncatastrophe]

Disclaimer: I am not George Lucas and therefore do not own Star Wars.  This is merely a work of fan fiction, and no profit is being made from it.

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[pronker]

Very nice, tentative and successful beginning to their married life. I'm reading 'Marriage and Family in the Middle Ages' by Gies which mentions on p. 282 the initial ushering of the groom to the bride, as per your first scene.

[wyncatastrophe]

Thanks - yeah, that's one way to break the ice.

Pronking at 6 a.m. and found these:

[pronker]

There's this neato comm metafandom that posted interesting links on writing tricks that were kinda neat:

http://kaneko.dreamwidth.org/40129.html?format=light

and an absolute hoot of a test for one's fics that I'm going to try on one of my long stories:

http://mithrigil.livejournal.com/513392.html