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wyld_dandelyon

Flash Fiction: Tadpoles

Jan 23, 2010 06:13

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Fantastic! ext_210743 January 23 2010, 13:18:08 UTC

I absolutely love this story! I guess I'm especially fond because it ALWAYS rains on my birthday, no matter where in the world I am. Writing it as a diary entry is just perfect, and your descriptions are vivid.
Nice job!

Re: Fantastic! wyld_dandelyon January 23 2010, 19:07:19 UTC

Sympathy on the rain for your birthday!

I'm glad you liked it.

story ext_206076 January 23 2010, 13:26:19 UTC

Very cute! I loved the frogs raining down and only falling in her drink. :)

Fun anonymous January 23 2010, 13:52:51 UTC

This was a great, fun story. I like that they are all concerned with things other than the obvious - it's raining frogs!

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Re: Fun wyld_dandelyon January 23 2010, 19:05:56 UTC

Thank you!

anonymous January 23 2010, 19:35:42 UTC

I still can't believe she didn't get any tadpoles in her mouth with all the wiggling in the mud and laughing! Cute story!

---ganymeder
http://www.ganymeder.com

wyld_dandelyon January 23 2010, 20:25:52 UTC

By that time she was doing what the Wind Serpent wanted! However unwillingly.

Love the dance ext_213241 January 24 2010, 00:52:04 UTC

I've always heard you should dance like no one's watching you. I love the dancing as though a serpent god is watching you! Great story. - Tony Noland