Loved the continuation of Fluffy. And so happy that changing at will is now an option. I mean, those robbers were scared off so being a werewolf is useful.
I love werewolves, but even so, it takes a real effort of will to suspend disbelief over the whole full moon thing. I like seeing a different method to trigger the magic. And I think that Fluffy having control over her shape changing ability has lots of potential. This world could go lots of fun places.
In flash fiction, it's hard to have a story at all (as opposed to a vignette), much less a story that ignores established tropes. 1000 words isn't much, and detailed worldbuilding (as well as many of the stories I'd like to tell) needs more space.
But I'm glad you're enjoying Fluffy, since I am too. :-D
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Lovely Christmassy story!
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But I'm glad you're enjoying Fluffy, since I am too. :-D
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When I started writing, you'd never have convinced me that I could write short stories this short. I had trouble getting stories under 5000 words!
I suspect songwriting has something to do with that.
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A charming story.
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